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Going Buggy
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner → (All Poetry by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner)
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Late night (well, actually, early, early morning) musings ...


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Red, ripe fruits, suddenly rare,
due to salmonella scare ---
we have all been put under
tomato warnings.  Thunder
no longer appears so bad:
no BLTs makes me sad.
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Persistence does not include
the weather, unless it's summer ---
heat and humidity is
the norm, the same old same bummer
of a pattern, day after
day --- maybe for variety
a pop-up thunderstorm --- or
maybe not.  Texas weather --- wheee!
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die, bug.  stop buzzing in
my ear!  ev'ry time my
hand draws near, off you go
until the next pass 'round
my head.  i want you gone,
i want you dead.  you are
getting on my last nerve ...
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... Will it storm tonight, or just
tease us?  Storms to the North
may or may not approach.  This
is what gets me, the uncertainty of
yes/no/perhaps.  Somebody will get
the forecast right.  Just don't know who.
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One hundred twenty eight
(probably less, by now)
minus twenty, maybe forty
(if lucky) reviews equals
a lot less than trackers, tracking ---
doesn't add up.  Totally bumfuzzled.
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(c) 2008, Karla Dorman (6/14)

 

 


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 Reviews of "Going Buggy"
Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on June 15, 2008
Thank you for sharing your musings, Karla. Wishing you the best with love and peace,

Regis

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on June 15, 2008
interesting snipets--pretty good trick with that little bug

Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on June 15, 2008
Funny Karla I find myself in the same situation saying Buggy be gone.
Thank you for sharing .

Newfie Hugs are on the way, Rose

Reviewed by Michael Guy
Reviewed on June 14, 2008
You want bugs... zzzzzzzzz Come here, to the Ocala National Forest in Florida. I have spiders the size of ping-pong balls on my porch! and Deer Flies that look like flying clothes pins (bite is vicious!) but speaking of Wx: seems less flies this year than last due to the drought here I'm guessing. I don't mind. Bugs I got, but trackers few! You're lucky... mine 128-105...Later, michael

Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper
Reviewed on June 14, 2008
We all have those pet "buggy" peeves. When I see your but on the screen, it reminds me of the gnats that find their way into my kitchen and everytime I eat, here comes that pesky gnat. Oh well....

Reviewed on June 14, 2008
My older sister, (well shes like a sister) is in he Heartland,w here entire cities have gone under water, we are praying that we hear from her soon, thank you for sharing
God Bless
Michelle~

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling
Reviewed on June 14, 2008
Well done dear friend...Oooh that buggy season is here too! We've got the locusts, but what's even worse is the snakes! We've killed two this week, one garder snake one copper head! EEeeewww I don't like spiders and snakes! Hmm reminds me of that old song! Enjoyed the write, hope the weather is good for you this weekend!
Blessings from Ky.
Joyce B.

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on June 14, 2008
Welldone Karla. I hate buggy season too. Especially black fly season.

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on June 14, 2008
Thought you were the great forecaster, you should know when the storms are a'comin'...ed

Reviewed by Lois Christensen
Reviewed on June 14, 2008
Thought it was real bug too, cute, and like the way this was presented. I will eat tomatoes anyway, love them. So hot is this summer here in PA ALREADY, GUESS IT IS GOING TO BE A HOT HOT SUMMER EVERYWHERE.

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on June 14, 2008
Karla, you just owe me a new screen because I try to smack that bug on my monitor with a big hammer!

Georg

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on June 14, 2008
Love these shorties esopecially the bug one lol

As for the last...I stopped keeping score, if in it for reviews I would not survive
hugs
Fee

Reviewed on June 14, 2008
Marvelous midnight musings, Karla! BRAVA! Love the crawling bug on the screen; appropo for the title of this one! Brilliant write; brava!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed on June 14, 2008
I have asked the person sitting next to me in the library to help me wipe the insect off the screen but he couldn´t! wonderful poem with deeply meaningful verses. A pleasure to read you dear sister and friend in America.
abdi-noor

Reviewed by Deborah Munson (Reader)
Reviewed on June 14, 2008
My dear ever so faithful reviewer Karen! Insomnia has me carefully going through my reviews and noticing without a beat your hand is always in the pot -- stirring encouragment and praise, baking batches of care. Tomatoes are my favorite~! I think I'll take the chance and eat em anyway! Well Done! Deborah

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on June 14, 2008
Karla, I loved these...and do you know when my screen opened to your poetry page, I thought that little ant crawling around was on my actual screen! Very cute!


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