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Octopus
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... it squeezes and squeezes with migrained grip ....

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... didn't catch it in time.  Fastened
to the right side of my head is
an octopus, with tentacles
sucking my eyeball until it
becomes smaller than the left.  It

squeezes and squeezes with migrained
grip; it will not let go.  Have to
give in to the inky darkness,
hiding in a cave of curtained
comfort until it goes away ....

(c) 2008, Karla Dorman (7/28)


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 Reviews of "Octopus"
Reviewed by Axilea MU
Reviewed on August 1, 2008
"give in to the inky darkness"
what a lovely, evocative line
for painful situation.
Nice octopus metaphor.

Axilea

Reviewed on July 31, 2008
I feel the pain, dear karla and wish this migraine go away

Reviewed by Juliet Waldron
Reviewed on July 30, 2008
A migraine poem--and it Feels Real!

Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on July 29, 2008
a scourge to be rid of -- migraines, my head in a vice -- my gut in the throws of nausea -- my eyes so sensitive to light, my ears so sensitive to sound -- when will this misery unwind from my body -- I hope you didn't suffer too long --may peace find you this day -- JMW

Reviewed by Mary Patterson
Reviewed on July 29, 2008
Miagraines are TERRIBLE.. I know them well also!.......M

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on July 29, 2008
ouch,,,, take care!

Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on July 29, 2008
I know how this feels as I suffered for too many years untill the massage therapist said I can help you and he did, I have to say it has been a few years since I have had one. Rest quietly.

Newfie Hugs are on the way, Rose

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on July 29, 2008
Karla, I only suffered from migranes when I was expecting my last child, and that was in the early months, and I remember at times wanting to cry. My thoughts and prayers are with you.

Reviewed on July 28, 2008
Hello Karla,

How vividly you describe the migraine that I suffer, from my eyesight
(Astigmatism)... In verse yet.

Cynthia

Reviewed by RaeLynn Teller
Reviewed on July 28, 2008
I come back and you're under the weather.
So sorry to hear that.
Horrible when an option for relief is gouging one's own eye out.
Yup--I get them too.
Hope you feel better.
Well expressed--RaeLynn

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on July 28, 2008
Better an octopus than a boa constrictor...though I have not had migraines in quite sometime, I feel for ya hon, I really do...Ed

Reviewed by Jill curry (Reader)
Reviewed on July 28, 2008
o jeeze i have migraines about 4 days before a storm..healing hugs

Reviewed by Elizabeth Price
Reviewed on July 28, 2008
Ugh, You have my sympathy. I've had many migraines and am happy I haven't for a long time. Liz

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on July 28, 2008
Ouch, they can really drag you down, makes my ears ring too. Sure hope you get feeling better soon....

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Bernice Angoh
Reviewed on July 28, 2008
Sorry, migraines stinks.

Reviewed by Theresa Koch
Reviewed on July 28, 2008
Wow this is great I too get migrains

Reviewed by Barbara Terry
Reviewed on July 28, 2008
Advil works. I am very happy that I do not suffer from migraines. The image of an octopus on your head is very scary to say the least, but if that is what a migraine feels like, then I am glad I don't get them. Thank you for sharing.

May the Lord Jesus bless you, and those whom you love, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your little sister, Barbie

Reviewed on July 28, 2008
I get Migrains myself they are not fun, thank you for sharing this pain, the best thing is to try and lay in a quiet and dark room, Excederin works for me as well, thank you for being able to express the horrific pain in these lines
In Christs Love
Michelle~

Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green
Reviewed on July 28, 2008
Perfect metaphor for an excruciatingly painful and highly debilitating
condition. Condition? Scourge!! Hate that you are plagued by migraines! Hope and pray
that a cure that works for everyone is on the way. SOON!!
(((((((Love you!!!))))) Pea .....PS: T h a n k . y o u for
pulling out all the stops re Mirror not for Him !! Hope it means the headache is well behind you!!!! B'ilin' in Nawth Kehlan' {but at least that last hurricane blew out to sea).

Reviewed by Charlie
Reviewed on July 28, 2008
Oh! I hate migraines! Cold-dark room, silence, and an ice-pack over my eyes, 4 hrs, and then, sunglasses! Nothing else will do... --Charlie

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on July 28, 2008
A lightning compared with an octopus, a pain compared with an octopus, migraines cause are not researched properly because the lack of funds, they are used (those funds) to find more effective weapons.

Georg

Reviewed on July 28, 2008
OUCH. I am sorry you are having another maigraine; know you are always in my prayers! Please take care of yourself! Painful write, very well written and imaged! BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twink, Karen Lynn. :( (prayers, too!)

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on July 28, 2008
so sorry--take a rest and be well

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on July 28, 2008
It squeezes and squeezes with migrained
grip;

And I can feel your pain. I hate migraines more than any other pain, and when I get one, I am completely useless. Hope yours goes away quickly.


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