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What You Do To Me
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner → (All Poetry by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner)
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... i want. ....

Image (c) 2008, Karla Dorman


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... the colors of the season, too brief,
lingering on the tongue in memory of
what summer was all about --- now
that winter's bitter storms are howling
outside the door, embrace me in your
heat, kiss me to remember --- i want.
to be naked.  to be left totally spent on
the floor with a sigh, undone by poetry.

(c) 2008, Karla Dorman (8/26)


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 Reviews of "What You Do To Me"
Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on August 30, 2008
your photo is breathtaking in its starkness -- so bold, so beautiful -- your metaphor so flowing gently like a brook -- a masterful write my dear Karla -- keep the pen close by your side -- JMW

Reviewed by Rebecca Lerwill
Reviewed on August 27, 2008
Karla, one of your best, for sure!!
Love,
Becca~

Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper
Reviewed on August 27, 2008
Great imagery! That orange sky is fabulous. Lovely write.

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on August 27, 2008
Karla this a beautiful write
than again you're an outstanding Den Poetess
Thanks for sharing this brilliant gem
LOve & Peace be with you

William

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on August 26, 2008
The ability to recapture what was is very special and you have such a natural talent, then to bring it all to life, splendid....

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Reviewed on August 26, 2008
I love this Karla, especially this part:

i want.
to be naked. to be left totally spent on
the floor with a sigh, undone by poetry.

What passion in these words, nicely done!
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on August 26, 2008
Hey Karla. Well done my friend. But aren't you rushing winter in just a bit? After all, it's only August 26. Three and a half more weeks of summer left to say nothing of Autumn.

Reviewed on August 26, 2008
Wonderful use of Metaphors, a great write as always
In Christs Love
Michelle~

Reviewed by Juliet Waldron
Reviewed on August 26, 2008
wow. Love the way the metaphors meld, leaving emotion behind!

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on August 26, 2008
wow,,,,, Sounds like romance brewing in the forecast, Well Done!

Reviewed by Linda Law
Reviewed on August 26, 2008
Very nice... I felt it. lindalaw

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on August 26, 2008
yes, a beautiful write- i love the line... "lingering on the tongue in memory of what summer was all about"

Reviewed by Rebecca McKeehan
Reviewed on August 26, 2008
Excellent write! Rebecca

Reviewed by RaeLynn Teller
Reviewed on August 26, 2008
Wow--its 108 here and raining. Isn't that the definition of a sauna?
Still you know how to heat it up.
Wonderful--RaeLynn

Reviewed by Bonnie May
Reviewed on August 26, 2008
ooh Karla, what a time for me to come home. WOW what a weather forcast...loved it. Love, Bonnie

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on August 26, 2008
Woo hoo, Karla, you are heating up the den this moning with this reminder that winter is on the way but even naked we can be warm and toasty snuggled up to another in front of a crackling fire.
Well done.
hugs
Fee

Reviewed on August 26, 2008
Delightful write, Karla; very well penned/imaged! BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Gene Williamson
Reviewed on August 26, 2008
That's a big order, Karla, but who could long resist? -gene.


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