Come, Ye Saviors (poem) by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen

Reviewed on November 2, 2008

Karla dont let whats happening, stop you from writing the wonderful words you write
In Christs Love
Michelle~

Reviewed on October 26, 2008

insomnia is no friend to the weary body and mind -- seeking only relief from the raging weariness -- no cure have I found -- to capsules I'll never acquiesce -- a great write Karla -- insomnia has been a mortal foe for most of my life -- peace to you dear lady -- JMW

Reviewed by 000 000 (Reader)

Reviewed on October 20, 2008

This is most unusual..coming from you. Compelling stuff!
CarolHawks

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson

Reviewed on October 19, 2008

Interesting and intense write, Karla.

Reviewed by Julianza (Julie) Shavin

Reviewed on October 18, 2008

Hello Karla: So here is your poem -- do you, like I, have persistent insomnia, then? I've been through everything and it's still hit or miss. I still seek that true savior in capsule form. So far they are all too fickle. Anne Sexton had to use a lot of pills to sleep. But it was being on Thorazine that rally affected her writing negatively, acc. to her.

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on October 18, 2008

The life of a Zombie, no one said it was be on a bed of roses.

Georg

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on October 17, 2008

a troubled mind suffering,causing insomnina, very intense writing that grips the reader,excellent Karla! Glad it's not you;-)

ET

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on October 17, 2008

interesting and very different for you!

Reviewed by John Flanagan

Reviewed on October 17, 2008

Karla,
I like the way you go here, it's more than clever, it's strong and credible and convincing. A fine piece.
John

Reviewed by Elizabeth Price

Reviewed on October 17, 2008

Now, you'll never sleep again. hehehehe... I'm awful. Great write. Liz

Reviewed by D Johnson

Reviewed on October 17, 2008

Wow, like Belle said, I'm glad this is a fiction write...but it is so real. Good writing about a hard subject.

Peace,
Dan

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart

Reviewed on October 17, 2008

I'm glad it is fiction Karla and it's very compelling and well penned.

Reviewed by Sheila Roy

Reviewed on October 17, 2008

Karla,
Your writing seems to have taken a turn. I'm glad you made comment on your influences...I do sense a change, and I was wondering. I tend to be overly sensitive to stuff. Anyways, this poem has a frustrated voice. Almost desperate. An excellent piece! Love and Hugs,
Sheila

Reviewed by Gene Williamson

Reviewed on October 17, 2008

Karla, most convincing. -gene.

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on October 17, 2008

Excellant dark write that packs a real wallop...well done.
Fee

Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper

Reviewed on October 17, 2008

Great write that describes a terrible situation. Insomina is nerve-wracking. Blessings.

Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain

Reviewed on October 17, 2008

Karla,

Glad you are fine my friend . . . please take several bows - your poetic talent has no boundaries!!

Hugs,

Lance

Reviewed by Rebecca McKeehan

Reviewed on October 17, 2008

Been there, done that, have LOTS of t-shirts! Couldn't have said it better than this, though. Great job! Rebecca

Reviewed by Flying Fox Ted L Glines (Reader)

Reviewed on October 17, 2008

Well, shoot, it's not like there is anything to keep us from sleeping out here -- just crazy hurricanes and psychotic tornados, to say nothing of the killer armadillos pouncing on ya outta the closet, and your occasional attack-daisy! I think Julie's ovoids might be just the ticket :-)

Ted

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on October 17, 2008

Great write, Karla; glad it's only fiction! Love the kitty; adorable!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen ("And You Can Take Two Naps And STILL Sleep At Night!!") Lynn. :D *Hee*

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on October 17, 2008

Xanax does it for me...they are an anti-stress medicine, but I rarely use it, because it CAN make you awake with a weird kind of hangover thing...I love to sleep, but I don't like awakening with that feeling...by the way, how hard is your head? Maybe your sister can hit you with an iron skillet to knock you out, as long as your head is hard enough to deal with it...;-) ed

Reviewed by Bonnie May

Reviewed on October 17, 2008

I am so glad this is fictional my friend. I think we've all been there, done that but it finally comes when its ready. Nothing seems to work except blocking everything from your mind. Which is easy for me, nothing there. Love and hugs, Bonnie

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on October 17, 2008

Glad to hear it's fictional. Ya scared me for a moment there Karla. lol Well done my friend.

Reviewed by Mary Lacey Desertrat

Reviewed on October 17, 2008

Karla,

Excellently written, telling of something we all go through, insomnia. You tell of it's aggravation very well.

Mary