Still feeling like ... well, wadded-up tissue, but THEY wanted to be heard. =]
Image (c) 2005, Karla Dorman
They're in there. "Let us out," they
scream, demanding to be released
from the claustrophobic confines of
my head. They're beating on the
walls with their fists, making so much
racket until I give in: their freedom.
That's all they wanted: to fly onto the
page. Who am I to hold them back?
(c) 2008, Karla Dorman (10/27)
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Reviewed on January 2, 2009
Let em loose Karla!
For every-time you do, you write amazing stuff, along with the great photos...they are your cheerleaders!
Sunshine to you, CarolHawks
Who indeed! And look what they've gone and done... called in all their friends from the heads of all the rest of us... the sound is positively DEAFENING!!!!!! :)) xx Hope you're feeling less bunged now that you've released the pressure a little. An excuse for yet another brandy... xx
Clauthophobic confines of your head? girl your thoughts most be enormous! ! ! as it should be from a so fine poet, don't blow them in your Kleenex.
Keep your head turn to Alaska, maybe you can pass it on to you know who.
Thank goodness you let them out to touch us all. You are somethin my friend, even sick you manage to give us a chuckle. Love and hugs and lots of prayers to get well. Love, Bonnie
This is a book of free verse poetry that addresses the seven main tests in life and offers some sensible solutions to passing those tests with minimal discomfort.
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For every-time you do, you write amazing stuff, along with the great photos...they are your cheerleaders!
Sunshine to you, CarolHawks
In Christs Love
Michelle~
claustrophobic confines of my head
but your head must be a maze of venues for those fettered marks to play hide and seek
still, best to let them revel in sunshine
thanks, ~Donna.
Be always safe,
Karen
Sheila
You have truly found your muse!
Love,
ET
I really like the way you are looking at creativity
and showing it to your reader.
Axilea
Sandie Angel :o)
Fee
Sandy
Richard
Cryssa
:) don't forget that hot tea!
What a very unique twist on writing. You are so talented!
Mary
Your words are screaming, "Let us OWWWWWWWWWWWWWWT!!" And you did, in fine fashion! EXCELLENT write, enjoyed! Well done!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your twink, Karen Lynn. :D *Achooooooo* *Snif*
Keep your head turn to Alaska, maybe you can pass it on to you know who.
Georg
That is such a great picture of you . . . you're so talented!!
Hugs and blessings,
Lance