Seasons Change (poem) by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on February 21, 2009

mankind and his seasons, are but seasons out of time -- we come in the spring, flourish in the summer and fall -- then leave without a trace in winter's howl -- this is a very beautiful and philosophical peace Karla -- extremely well written and thought out -- much peace and love to you my friend -- JMW

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on February 6, 2009

No wonder ...I am a Autumn child!!

Always knew there had to be a reason for my "unlucky side"!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Sheila Roy

Reviewed on February 6, 2009

A moving nature piece, Karla. I like the way you linked the seasons to a feeling. Hugs,
Sheila

Reviewed by Cryssa C

Reviewed on February 4, 2009

Superb write!
Cryssa

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on February 4, 2009

Quite powerful, and quite sad, Karla.

Reviewed by Flying Fox Ted L Glines (Reader)

Reviewed on February 4, 2009

Spot-on description of the seasons of our lives. And, here in our Autumn, we truly must remember the happiness and learned wisdom of prior seasons ... for our Autumn is when we validate our usefulness as elders. Oops :-)

Ted

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on February 3, 2009

The definition of Autumn slipping in when you weren't looking it the quintessence of the art of writing very little to say very much.
Perfect!

Georg

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on February 3, 2009

WOW! This is brilliant Karla
Well Penned
most enjoyable reading
Love & peace be with you

William

Reviewed by John Flanagan

Reviewed on February 3, 2009

Karla,
A journey through the seasons of relationships, comfort, security, love and loss, and there always seems to be loss, but we try to rise again, and we do, because we have no other choice. Thank you for this beautiful, elegant work.
John

Reviewed by Cindy Tuttle

Reviewed on February 3, 2009

I like the way it flows and how desciptive the words are- so full of heart. Thanks Karla.

With Love,
Cindy

Reviewed by Elizabeth Price

Reviewed on February 3, 2009

How dare he leave. Beautifully written. Liz

Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen

Reviewed on February 3, 2009

Karla this is amazing as always, your pens always inspire
In Christs Love
Michelle~

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo

Reviewed on February 3, 2009

Retrospective write so smoothly written, yet with the wisdom the recognize....

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Theresa Koch

Reviewed on February 3, 2009

This is awesome friend

Reviewed by Rose Rideout

Reviewed on February 3, 2009

Not only the Seasons change and move on dear Karla. Thank you for sharing your words.

Newfie Hugs are on the way, Rose

Reviewed by Christine Alwin

Reviewed on February 3, 2009

This is amazing Karla...the seasons of love....not all a pretty picture, how they do change.
Hugs,
Christine

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on February 3, 2009

Sad one you've penned, Karla; very well written! BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :(

Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain

Reviewed on February 3, 2009

Karla~!

Extremely deep and moving penning . . . your poetic words say so much!!

Blessings,

Lance

Reviewed by Bonnie May

Reviewed on February 3, 2009

What a beautifully sad write...How dare he hurt my Karla??? Spin him a Tornado Karla, and let him for ever spin in the wind...love and hugs, Bonnie

Reviewed by J'nia Fowler

Reviewed on February 3, 2009

Ah, so sad. You make your points well and I feel the melody as it swells to it's sad conclusion. Big hugs here. J'nia

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on February 3, 2009

Darker than your usual, but nonetheless a well lighted write from your soul...e

Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw)

Reviewed on February 3, 2009

Hi Karla,

All I can say is wow! Love the analogy in this one. Great write! Keep on writing! Stay strong...

In Spirit,
Bear