Just in Time (poem) by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Cryssa C

Reviewed on March 24, 2009

The double meaning makes this poem infinitely more beautiful...
Cryssa

Reviewed on March 22, 2009

Lovely write to showcase your faith, Karla. The flowers in the picture are beautiful. Don't think I've ever seen them before. Love and Hugs,
Sheila

Reviewed by David Clure

Reviewed on March 20, 2009

"Just in Time" is such a such a tribute to The God behind the season!
He does rescue us just in time doesn't He? You use breaks between the verses with great effect- I also like the way you put the chill in the word c.old the way your wrote it. ~ superb! enjoyed.

Reviewed by Jon Willey

Reviewed on March 17, 2009

so poetically wonderful Karla -- your faith and recognition of His loving grace -- your photograph is beautiful and so relaxing to view -- peace and love to you -- Jon Michael

Reviewed by Juliet Waldron

Reviewed on March 17, 2009

Nothing more hopeful and beautiful than apple blossoms. Your words are the breath of spring!

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson

Reviewed on March 17, 2009

Just beautiful Karla, as is your photo.

Reviewed by Mary Patterson

Reviewed on March 17, 2009

A beautiful picture Karla. You are becoming quite a photographer. God is always with you......M

Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson

Reviewed on March 16, 2009

I pray that God blesses you with good health, love and provision!

Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope)

Reviewed on March 16, 2009

Glad that you have met your long awaited friend: Spring.

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on March 16, 2009

Don't grab all of it, left something to me! Enjoy the warm!

Georg

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)

Reviewed on March 16, 2009

Beautiful pen...Hugss

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on March 16, 2009

Kept praying for Spring to come: thank God,
it arrived just in time.

So did I, and I think it's gonna be glorious.

Reviewed by Cindy Tuttle

Reviewed on March 15, 2009

Yes, spring did come in time. It is a beautiful time of year! Thank you Karla.

With Love,
Cindy

Reviewed by J'nia Fowler

Reviewed on March 15, 2009

Yes, thank God for this. Blessings, J'nia

Reviewed by Flying Fox Ted L Glines (Reader)

Reviewed on March 15, 2009

Fits the season -- also fits a life where Faith rules -- beautifully done Karla :-)

Ted

Reviewed by Gene Williamson

Reviewed on March 15, 2009

Karla, I admire your faith and sense of self,
and your great skill with the pen. -gene.

Reviewed by John Flanagan

Reviewed on March 15, 2009

Karla,
Rich in faith, joy, celebration and gratitude.
John

Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen

Reviewed on March 15, 2009

Karla tbis is a beautiful write, and the image is amazing as well, thank you for sharing
In Christs Love
Michelle~

Reviewed by 000 000 (Reader)

Reviewed on March 15, 2009

Son broke through the darkness....Magnificent!
Your talents shine!!!!

Reviewed by Christine Alwin

Reviewed on March 15, 2009

This is blooming with faith and thanks....beautiful Karla!
Love,Christine

Reviewed by J. Allen Wilson

Reviewed on March 15, 2009

Beautiful karla...so beautiful..God Bless

Reviewed by Marcia Miller-Twiford

Reviewed on March 15, 2009

Wonderful Karla. A new spring just five days away and a new beginning for all who take it.
Hugs,
~Marcia

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on March 15, 2009

When we're at the end of our rope, God brings the ground up to our feet too. Great write Karla. God bless.

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on March 15, 2009

Yes even up here in the frozen North the sun come out today and it seemed like there was a promise of summer in the air.

Fee

Reviewed by Elizabeth Price

Reviewed on March 15, 2009

Beautiful. Love it. Liz

Reviewed by Bonnie May

Reviewed on March 15, 2009

So beautiful and so welcomed...love and hugs for this fantastic spring write...love, Bonnie

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on March 15, 2009

"...thank God,
it arrived just in time. When all looked
lost, He saved me by His loving Grace."

Beautiful; spring means more than the blooming of leaves or flowers: it's also the reminder that Jesus died on the Cross to save mankind from sin. Thank you for sharing this beautiful, hope-filled reminder of the Easter season; very well done, Karla! And the piccy is gorgeous!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Linda Law

Reviewed on March 15, 2009

Karla, this is so beautiful... I truly love it! I'm going to save it.. you are so special... and have sooooo much talent... I just wish you could put them in a book someday... I had hoped you would send me a few pieces for my book... but maybe next time? I don't know if I have said this before, and it could offend some...but I never was into poetry (except the classics) and altho I had written some years before, especially when mother was murdered...I never felt that I had actually written them...I believed that God had put the words in my fingers to write... and when I came to AD I began writing... not like real poetry..but just writing in stanza's so to speak... but I don't always "like" poetry...the gushy kind, or the silly kind... so I tend to just pick and choose... however; I do enjoy your poems very much..even when you get on your dark side...because we all have that side... because there is a special loveliness - honesty- within them... and I really believe you are so talented... have a great day.. hugs, lindalaw

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on March 15, 2009

Oh sure, YOU get spring, while we still get the rain that you had then sent north...its NOT a fit day for man nor beast out there up here, cold, damp and rainy...good day to sleep...e & R