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Stubborn Poet
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner → (All Poetry by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner)
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The heat, a living thing, traps
its legs around my lungs, trying
to suck the air out of the scraps
of rags they have become.  The

sun, unmerciful!  beats down
on the head, stirring the brains
in the pot of my skull.  I brown,
then blacken, but do not fall.

Buzzards line the air currents,
waiting for me to drop my pen
into the dirt.  I will not relent:
wheel like a drunk but will not

give them the satisfaction of my
death:  I write on the unforgiving
sky, my story.  The night will cry
my epitaph in a thousand stars;

I will not fade; some part of me
will remain behind for all to see...

(c) 2009, Karla Dorman (6/19)
   

 


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 Reviews of "Stubborn Poet"
Reviewed by Cryssa C
Reviewed on June 27, 2009
I Like it!!
Cryssa

Reviewed by Sheila Roy
Reviewed on June 25, 2009
Excellent imagery! This is one reason why we write; to leave something behind. Hugs,
Sheila

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on June 22, 2009
i love the last lines!

Reviewed by Mark Lichterman
Reviewed on June 20, 2009
Karla, your words make me want to roll my sleeves up, loosen my collar and fan myself. You have a way of putting words together that draw a living picture of the, so sorry to say, the place you have to be, but hate having to be there.
Mark

Reviewed by ~ H (Reader)
Reviewed on June 20, 2009
Karla, you have an awesome gift, love Holly

Reviewed by Lori Moore
Reviewed on June 20, 2009
That lung trapping heat sounds like home.

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on June 20, 2009
Clever as always....so enjoy your poems Karla!

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on June 20, 2009
I have enjoyed this new shift in your writing style as you seem to put more of yourself into these writes of the heat and other weather related topics.
Hugs
Fee

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on June 20, 2009
Excellent, Karla. Very well put indeed.

Reviewed on June 19, 2009
YOU got that RIGHT! Karla!
Wonderful honest poem, I feel it myself!

WRITE ON!
Purple Lady Passion, SHEExoooo
P.S. Like your new writing style, if not new it seems it to me!

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on June 19, 2009
i rather call it creative determination ... good poets never fade they endeavor, so i'm sure you'll leave an impression ...

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on June 19, 2009
Fabulous poem Karla, one of your best! you rock girl!;-)...ET

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on June 19, 2009
Beautifully deep in vision and passions....

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Cindy Tuttle
Reviewed on June 19, 2009
You have words that will last Karla. Your gift is incredible!

With Love,
Cindy

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on June 19, 2009
It will be your inimitable poetic voice in poetry

Reviewed by Gene Williamson
Reviewed on June 19, 2009
I like this, Karla, especially, your beautiful sense of rhyme.
As for your stubborness, I am among your many fans who depend
on it. -gene.

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on June 19, 2009
Karla, what you see as stubborn, I see as strength!

Reviewed on June 19, 2009
This is awesome Karla, thank you for sharing, love the image
In Christs Love
Michelle~

Reviewed on June 19, 2009
You are one of the stubbornest people (poets) I have ever had the pleasure of knowing (or living with)! LOL GREAT write; powerfully penned! And I love the piccy of the *BUZZnards* flying! LOL BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed on June 19, 2009
Hi Karla, not only stubborn, but strong, too! Don't let those buzzards make you drop your pen... I hear buzzards are testing of one's pen... but this write should scare him off; i don't think buzzards are scared of drunks, or those that wheel like one... LOL... stay strong, my friend...

In Spirit,
Bear

Reviewed by neerja gandhi (Reader)
Reviewed on June 19, 2009
great write.....not to fade... good wishes...neerja

Reviewed on June 19, 2009
And so it does, written on the pages of eternity. Well done, Karla! Let those buzzards move on....

Reviewed by D Johnson
Reviewed on June 19, 2009
Karla, absolutely amazing work... well done!

Cheers,
Dan

Reviewed on June 19, 2009
It wasn't me honest !!
If it was, I would only be there to help you up :)
Stop helping me George LOL

Great write as always
Have a great day
The Buzzard

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on June 19, 2009
Watch it out! there's a hungry crazy buzzard flying here in AD, and boy! he's hungry of little innocent girls like you! LOL

Georg



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