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SeptEmber's Rain
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner → (All Poetry by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner)
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In memory of what we lost.

Image (c) 2009, Karla Dorman


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Today being what
IT is, I look out.  The sky
is as heavy as
my eyes:  clouded.  Tears
threaten to spill.  Doesn't take
much to get them to
falling.  T.V. o f f:
can't watch.  Images from back
then permanently
tattooed on the brain:
don't need to see them again.
One time was enough.
My heart cracks open,
drops to my feet, bleeds as I
remember friends who
lost loved ones THAT day:
my pain nothing compared to
what they are feeling.
The sky understands.
SeptEmber's rain falls outside
and indoors as well ...

(c) 2009, Karla Dorman (9/11)


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 Reviews of "SeptEmber's Rain"
Reviewed on September 14, 2009
Karla you captured the emotions well
In Christs Love
Michelle~

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on September 13, 2009
beutiful, powerful and filled with feeling!

Reviewed by Carole Mathys
Reviewed on September 12, 2009
A powerful piece of poetry, Karla...perfectly said!
peace, Carole~

Reviewed by Gene Williamson
Reviewed on September 12, 2009
Karla, so many of us are moved by this day, and your words. -gene.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on September 12, 2009
Most powerful offering Karla!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Jms Bell
Reviewed on September 12, 2009
AN EXCEPTIONAL WRITE ABOUT A 'NEVER TO BE FORGOTTEN' DAY IN OUR NATION'S HISTORY...FILLED WITH THE EMOTIONS OF ONE OF THIS GREAT COUNTRY'S VETERANS...THANK YOU...FOR YESTERDAY AND TODAY. BLESSINGS AND GOD BLESS YOU. JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper
Reviewed on September 12, 2009
A very sad anniversary none of us will ever forget. Yours is a good poem to commemorate feeling we all had.

Reviewed on September 12, 2009
Indeed, Karla. Well said!

Reviewed by J'nia Fowler
Reviewed on September 12, 2009
You have captured the strength of emotions that you and most others feel today, 8 years later. And your picture is perfect for this wonderful poem as well. Bug hug, J'nia

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on September 12, 2009
SeptEmber's rain falls outside
and indoors as well ...

So sadly true, for so many, yesterday.

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on September 12, 2009
9/11, i was just arriving back in Europe from somewhere east and was dropping my mine bags in the floor on the den floor as the TV was on Welcoming back Mister Myself, the picture in the screen was airplanes smashing on the NY Trade Towers like that Gozilla movies and my first thought were how childish could Hollywood gets and switched off the damn box.
Then the telephone rang at it wasn't more believe.
Regretting that dumb Executive Order about prohibiting the taking off of GOP's engaged in support of extremism leprosy.
Pissed off? you bet I am!

Georg


Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Reviewed on September 11, 2009
You have captured my feelings so well in this poem, Karla, this rain is in all of our hearts today!
Much peace, love, and light, and many blessings,
Amber "V"

Reviewed by Patrick Granfors
Reviewed on September 11, 2009
Very powerful capture of what we all feel. Patrick

Reviewed by Cindy Tuttle
Reviewed on September 11, 2009
This was so well written and filled with heart Karla. You have such a wonderful gift.

With Love,
Cindy

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on September 11, 2009
Beautifully said, Karla, beautifully.

John

Reviewed by Cryssa C
Reviewed on September 11, 2009
They say that when you practice something you get better and better at it... I know that it is true with your writing. Your poetry just gets better and better. This is a perfect combination of form and emotion.
Cryssa

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on September 11, 2009
....perfectly descibed...as the rains fell everywhere..so sad.

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on September 11, 2009
Very well described, Karla.

Reviewed on September 11, 2009
The weather matches the somber mood of our nation as we remember and reflect on the horrors of eight years ago today. Powerfully penned, and that image--WOW! NEVER forget; I know I won't! I can't, mustn't!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :( *tears!*

Reviewed by Sheila Roy
Reviewed on September 11, 2009
Yes, it is a dreary day here in NH, too. It seems an appropriate reminder to us so we don't forget. A heartfelt tribute, Karla. Hugs,
Sheila

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on September 11, 2009
Love this poem.

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on September 11, 2009
Karla, you've captured this so beautifully.

Reviewed on September 11, 2009
Well written peice karla. We all condemn all forms of terrorism. I feel your pain. yur brother and friend Abdi-Noor

Reviewed by Swan Son
Reviewed on September 11, 2009
I feel what you are saying .... neither do I need to see television reminders of what happened on 9/11. Living near NYC and being originally from NYC I know many who lost someone close to them --- and as an American I know we all lost a piece of ourselves.
Take care .... pray for peace to come to all those who suffer still. Susan

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on September 11, 2009
Lovely write and one that capture the feelings of fall.
hugs
fee


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