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Bolt from the Blue
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner → (All Poetry by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner)
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... when the world flashbulbs white: ....

Image (c) 2009, Karla Dorman


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The sky, blue parchment, one
cloud poemed across it.  Uncle
is in the garden, weeding; Auntie
muttering behind him about too

much rain.  She picks up a rock,
turns it over, worrying it like she
does everything else, puts it in
her pocket.  Uncle plods on, his

hands flashing between the rows
of verdant growth, knowing what
is good and what isn't; it's been
handed down from father to son:

he was a good student.  Uncle
straightens his back; hard working
the land.  Will be good when little
Johnny gets older; he could use

the help.  Right now he's still too
young.  Uncle turns to say
something to Auntie when the
world flashbulbs white:  a bolt

from the blue.  Somehow, it
missed them but the old oak tree
wasn't so lucky.  He remembers
it like it was yesterday:  it gave

Auntie something new to worry
about and gray hair.  She says
it was the rock that saved them.
She doesn't go out to the garden,

though:  refuses to take chances.
When Uncle and Johnny go out
back, she's at the door, rolling the
rock in her fingers, saying a prayer.

(c) 2009, Karla Dorman (9/19)


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 Reviews of "Bolt from the Blue"
Reviewed by Cryssa C
Reviewed on September 22, 2009
A story poem... well done!
Cryssa

Reviewed by Elizabeth Russo
Reviewed on September 20, 2009
Karla, I have to agree with Gene and say this is one of your absolute best! So vivid, almost bone-chilling as you can truly feel the effects of that bolt out of the blue and the ending is perfect. So well done! ~ Many hugs, Elizabeth

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on September 20, 2009
Karla,
This is an excellent poem, everything about it is right from first to last: the mood, the setting, the telling detail, the ending.
Kudos!

John

Reviewed by Gene Williamson
Reviewed on September 20, 2009
Great! One of your best, Karla. Love the opening line:

The sky, blue parchment, one
cloud poemed across it.

-gene

Reviewed by Louisa Dobbins
Reviewed on September 20, 2009
This is beautiful. I like that it is natural to those familiar.:-)

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on September 20, 2009
"One cloud poemed across it"
Now that is pure Stormspinner skill.
And forgive me, but I clearly saw a kind
of rosary in the last stanza.
Blessings and love ...

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on September 20, 2009
i like this write very much!

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on September 20, 2009
Excellent writing sweet lady..enjoyed...Hugss

Reviewed on September 20, 2009
A lot of superstitions got their beginning in the very same way. Nicely done, Karla.

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on September 20, 2009
Make one to think back to simpler times, when a little pebble was the only thing between you and a bolt of lightning...

Georg


Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on September 20, 2009
Finely written with an excellent story line, Karla. God bless.

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on September 19, 2009
excellent finale ... easily visualized ... the true test of an accomplished poem ...

Reviewed on September 19, 2009
Karen thank you for sharing, a great poem here, keep these coming
In Christs Love
Michelle~

Reviewed by Lori Moore
Reviewed on September 19, 2009
Wonderful descriptions. Enjoyed... as always.

Reviewed by Sheila Roy
Reviewed on September 19, 2009
I love that first description of the sky, Karla. Very unique. This is a great write! Hugs,
Sheila

Reviewed by Juliet Waldron
Reviewed on September 19, 2009
A wonderful short story in verse--and an evocative picture, too. Thanks, Karla!

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on September 19, 2009
..the power of prayer..this triggers back memories of my own..we live on such a fine line..great write Karla
Love,
Christine

Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)
Reviewed on September 19, 2009
I love the ending to this poem. Brilliant!!

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on September 19, 2009
Superb imagery in this gem Karla! Fantastic photo! Kudo's!

Reviewed by Carole Mathys
Reviewed on September 19, 2009
A very unique take on a story peom, Karla...almost sounds like a country song...well penned!
peace, Carole~

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on September 19, 2009
Love this home growm almost blue grass song style to this one Karla, well done.
fee

Reviewed by Jms Bell
Reviewed on September 19, 2009
EXCELLENT KARLA...DONE REALLY WELL WITH THE IMAGERY SO VERY VIVID...ONE SEES THE SCENE SO PLAIN. THANK GOD NO ONE WAS HURT AND THANKS FOR SHARING. BLESSINGS. JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on September 19, 2009
Karla, I love the imagery in this...can see it all before me...and love that photo!

Reviewed on September 19, 2009
GREAT write, Karla; very well penned! And that piccy is visually arresting!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin sister, Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on September 19, 2009
Gotta love the power of the rock. Auntie ain't no dummy, lightning strikes out there. Then again maybe the gas leak in the oven will ignite a mighty blast and blow Auntie clear up to Heaven. One down, forty-nine to go.


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