Karla, I have to agree with Gene and say this is one of your absolute best! So vivid, almost bone-chilling as you can truly feel the effects of that bolt out of the blue and the ending is perfect. So well done! ~ Many hugs, Elizabeth
"One cloud poemed across it"
Now that is pure Stormspinner skill.
And forgive me, but I clearly saw a kind
of rosary in the last stanza.
Blessings and love ...
EXCELLENT KARLA...DONE REALLY WELL WITH THE IMAGERY SO VERY VIVID...ONE SEES THE SCENE SO PLAIN. THANK GOD NO ONE WAS HURT AND THANKS FOR SHARING. BLESSINGS. JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
GREAT write, Karla; very well penned! And that piccy is visually arresting!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin sister, Karen Lynn. :D
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on September 19, 2009
Gotta love the power of the rock. Auntie ain't no dummy, lightning strikes out there. Then again maybe the gas leak in the oven will ignite a mighty blast and blow Auntie clear up to Heaven. One down, forty-nine to go.
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Cryssa
This is an excellent poem, everything about it is right from first to last: the mood, the setting, the telling detail, the ending.
Kudos!
John
The sky, blue parchment, one
cloud poemed across it.
-gene
Now that is pure Stormspinner skill.
And forgive me, but I clearly saw a kind
of rosary in the last stanza.
Blessings and love ...
Georg
In Christs Love
Michelle~
Sheila
Love,
Christine
peace, Carole~
fee
(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin sister, Karen Lynn. :D