The Window's Pane (poem) by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on December 24, 2009

Karla, rain and snow, gifts from the heavens given by the hand of divine providence -- love the perspective of your photo -- love your perspective of the rain and snow upon the window pane and your face -- peace love and joy to you my dear friend -- Jon Michael

Reviewed by Sheila Roy

Reviewed on December 6, 2009

Nice perspective in this piece, Karla.
Sheila

Reviewed by Rose Rideout

Reviewed on December 4, 2009

As usual Karla, another beautiful write.

Newfie Hugs are on the way, Rose

Reviewed by Julianza (Julie) Shavin

Reviewed on December 3, 2009

This is cool. Writing from the standpoint of the pane. Sort of. I enjoyed this. Unusual. What would you think of carrying through the alliteration, and using the word "affection" at the end? Just a thought. As always, it's yours. As you know, -- yes! there's something to be said for the rain. AND the snow. The weather in general. It has so much impact on us. Thanks, Karla. I adore the picture! If you ever have feedback on my pictures/paintings, I'd appreciate it. PS when i woke up, it was sunny AND snowing. The old "devil beating his wife" thing. Now it's just a weak sun. I guess the devil and his wife are both taking a break! julie

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson

Reviewed on December 3, 2009

Karla, this is beautiful...and a keeper!

Reviewed by Liana Margiva

Reviewed on December 3, 2009

Beautiful poem!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by Patrick Granfors

Reviewed on December 2, 2009

Excellent Karla. Patrick

Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen

Reviewed on December 2, 2009

Karen that picture and poem are both amazing, I encourage you to submit this one, thank you for sharing
In Christs Love
Michelle~

Reviewed by Cindy Tuttle

Reviewed on December 2, 2009

Beautifuly written Karla. Thank you.

With Love,
Cindy

Reviewed by John Flanagan

Reviewed on December 2, 2009

Karla,
You're turning out wonderful work.

John

Reviewed by Axilea MU

Reviewed on December 2, 2009

Written from an unusual perspective. I was surprised to find sadness and love expressed in this context! Interesting.

Axilea

Reviewed by Christine Alwin

Reviewed on December 2, 2009

wow Karla, I could feel every drop of emotion,,this is simply beautiful and goes into my library
Love
Christine

Reviewed by Gene Williamson

Reviewed on December 2, 2009

Karla, your writing somehow is getting better everyday.
Rain becomes you. -gene.

Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)

Reviewed on December 2, 2009

One of your best Karla. This is what poetry is all about. You tie it all together perfectly.

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on December 2, 2009

i love the softness of this-very sweet and fantastic photo!

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on December 2, 2009

Very well done Karla, this is one excellant write and should be sumitted to mags.
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Reviewed by Susan de Vegter

Reviewed on December 2, 2009

Love the poem of the pain of a pane. The video even caused a chill and I'm here in Florida. The closest we get to winter, so far, is 69 degrees high for one day.
Dig in and get some hot chocolate to keep warm.
Blessings and love,
Susan

Reviewed by LadyJtalks LadyJzTalkZone (Reader)

Reviewed on December 2, 2009

yes, they say it will flurry here by weeks end. going to see your video now. LadyJ

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on December 2, 2009

Gotta love the pane for expressing her point of view and I'm sure the sill is waiting to have her say.

Reviewed by Gianetta Ellis (Reader)

Reviewed on December 2, 2009

Wonderful, Karla ~

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on December 2, 2009

Beautiful, Karla. God bless.

Reviewed by John Bidwell

Reviewed on December 2, 2009

This is really beautiful!
Wow- take a bow.

John

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on December 2, 2009

"...A bit of both/kissing my fragile face with love ..."

Beautiful write and piccy, Karla; well done! And loved your video, too!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on December 2, 2009

Its just like you wrote, here today
woke up with rain
pelting at my window pane
unmercifully leaving streaks
of rain tears,
as I try to follow one
a thousand more come
a never ending scene
all day rain has been forecast
so I'll stay indoor read and review a while......
enjoyed your write Karla
Love & peace be with you

William

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on December 2, 2009

Windows pane's words, telling us that we shouldn't look through all the time and see the messages written there only for us.

Georg

Reviewed by neerja gandhi (Reader)

Reviewed on December 2, 2009

beautiful....absolute beauty in words. Best wishes Karla. Neerja