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You're New Year's Toast
by Walt Hardester → (All Poetry by Walt Hardester)
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You Know......


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When I finally broke down,

And cried my guts out over it.


Standing in the kitchen,


Alone in the corner.


You watching.


You watching,


Not caring,


I cried worse.


Here’s your sign, you’re toast.




 

©2007 Walt Hardester
 


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 Reviews of "You're New Year's Toast"
Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on March 7, 2016
Succinctly powerful in meaning intended and shared, Walt. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Barbara Smith
Reviewed on January 6, 2008
Walt, when you see the burnt toast you know it is over and all we can do is step out of the picture and give them their reins and hope your heart will heal. A good write!

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on January 5, 2008
Inquisitve nature demands I wonder just what the true signifigance is of the burnt toast...is it the final play in a lover's quarrel or somthing else all together different.

Fee

Reviewed by Southern Comfort
Reviewed on January 5, 2008
Hey Bro! Stan was choppin up dead chicken and then amid the dead flesh he stole a New Year's kiss, just too romantic! There is hope for everyone, for every pot there is a lip, and some pot is a lookin for you! LOVE YA! Sissy

Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)
Reviewed on January 5, 2008
I'm crying too...but clinging to the truth that 2008 will be the best, love ya, Holly

Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on January 5, 2008
Well Walt my New Years toast didn't seem quiet like this, but a new year is upon us, we can start over fresh.

Newfie Hugs, Rose

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on January 5, 2008
And now it's time to toast a whole new year, to chill out, and perhaps, have a beer.

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on January 5, 2008
Oh brother! here we go again...kitchens in the morning are an awful place to be alone, next time invite someone wearing a very short morning gown so you will have a real reason to cry over a burned toast
Georg

Reviewed on January 4, 2008
OUCH. Remind me never to get on your bad side, Walt! Effectively penned heartbreak...hope you're okay???? Well done.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on January 4, 2008
such a toast!

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on January 4, 2008
hmmmmmmmm,,,,, more butter ,, jam and hugs,,OOOOOO
OK,,lol,,,Christine

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
Reviewed on January 4, 2008
De ja vu! I read this or did I imagine your words just last week. Toasted and burnt. I can smell it from here!
Love,
Susan

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on January 4, 2008
I needed this laugh, thanks...ed

Reviewed by larry linville
Reviewed on January 4, 2008
Thanks, Walt. I needed the laugh. This represents my cooking ability.

Larry

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on January 4, 2008
Just love the play on words. Why I do declare I think I have said just those words before too...

Be safe,
Karen

Reviewed on January 4, 2008
Excellent display of emotions through your words, Walt; well penned! BRAVO!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on January 4, 2008
And it don't deserve to be buttered up...

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on January 4, 2008
Walt there are so many deep emotions in this it's hard to sort them out. A simple looking complex poem. You do this so well!

ET

Reviewed by Rosalind Thompson (Reader)
Reviewed on January 4, 2008
It's so open that it allows the reader to imagine any background.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on January 4, 2008


Taking a deep breath of fresh air as I read this thought provoking write!!

I think there will be more than one slice of toast this upcoming year!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Rebecca Lerwill
Reviewed on January 4, 2008
Cynical!!!
Yes - I love it!
One of your latest best, Walt.
Love,
Becca~

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling
Reviewed on January 4, 2008
A touching write, a bit sad, wishing you a new year filled with joy, happiness, good health, satisfaction, prosperity, new discoveries, laughter and peace....
Blessings,
Joyce B.

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on January 4, 2008
The cry should be done by now?
2008 is going fine fer me, how bouts you?
Ron

Reviewed on January 4, 2008

Intriguing... "You're New Year's Toast" strikes imagination, this reader's and makes me think on wit-sad-angry images.

In admiration,


Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU


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