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Her Torture
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She is damaged goods with emotional and physical scars,
Of abuse endured during her formative years.
She is a beautiful young woman everyone says,
Inside though is a tortured soul.
Now she seeks approval by dancing.
If you can call it that.
For a pretty girl the money is good,
The constant adoration of the patrons,
Marriage proposals,
Still inside the emptiness.
Money, drugs and the "Fast Lane" life,
Distract for a while.
Self esteem is non-existent.
Times not blurred by a drug and alcohol fog,
Are spent in fear and self loathing.
For she too cannot say no,
From different roots this malady came.
With a paralyzing inability to make a decision,
She allows others to control her life.
She swears some day this cycle will end,
But not holding her breath,
Till that day comes.

2010 Walt Hardester     

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 Reviews of "Her Torture"
Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
Reviewed on March 10, 2010
So sad....but so very true for a lot of young women. WEll done, Walt.

Anna

Reviewed on January 31, 2010
I hope that day is not too late for her, to enjoy A real Life, WHEN HER CHOICES are made! You wrote this great Walt!

Blessings of PEACE and HARMONY, SOULFUL_PurplePaSsionsSHEEoxxo
WRITE ON!
READ ON!

Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)
Reviewed on January 19, 2010
She allows others to control her life.
She swears some day this cycle will end,
But not holding her breath,
Till that day comes.

Here's to HOPE--
exceptional work..

Vesna :)

Reviewed on January 19, 2010
I hope that day comes soon. An emotive pen Walt.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on January 18, 2010
A moving write Walt!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on January 18, 2010
A sad write Walt
But sadly truth for many
of beautiful young woman.....
Peace be with you

William

Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot
Reviewed on January 18, 2010
This really kicks in, and hits home...Well done Walt..xx

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on January 18, 2010
A very sad tale, my friend.

Reviewed by LadyJtalks LadyJzTalkZone (Reader)
Reviewed on January 17, 2010
I've seen this more times then I wish I had and it is always such a shame. The lucky ones make it past this and have really good lives. To many are lost to it and never do they survive. A sad write my friend and I hope it's not to personal a friend you write about. LadyJ

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on January 17, 2010
so many do torture themselves with their pasts--this is well written,

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
Reviewed on January 17, 2010
Your words here have the depth and passion of someone who really cares. You came through Walt and you're writing is deeper than ever before.

Reviewed on January 17, 2010
Sadness in these lines ... effectively penned, Walt.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :(

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on January 17, 2010
A pretty box can be in disguise containing all Pandora's secrets.

Georg


Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on January 17, 2010
This one hits home for I have met a few girls like this (my daughter worked as a coat check girl at a strip club) and you have captured their world so well.
fee

Reviewed on January 17, 2010
Powerful write, Walt; well done! Love the piccy!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn.

Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater
Reviewed on January 17, 2010
Reality. This girl could have been me. Instead, I subscribed to the wolves, dancing in the medicine circle. Nature is the only thing that will heal a woman's soul...men and women alike respect nature as a healer and teacher..Her Torture is awakening poetry, Walt...Blessed Be.

~S~

Reviewed by Deborah Plante (Reader)
Reviewed on January 17, 2010
So many I know...important words...Blessings


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