Seen through a framed conclusion \.()./ The exceeder of emboldening is fixed \.()./ Aforetime )as well( this continual existence\.()./
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Reviews of "Atop my head"
Reviewed by blue soplain (Reader)
Reviewed on April 6, 2008
i see a halo; slightly tilted but just for balance's sake; you are one of the few whom i could never see[through] as framed per se, put in a box, a boundary. ..
too much of you spills over into every breath of light and life. ...and moreover trans.fixed by that em[blem]bold.(p)en(n)ing.. ..
i cant imagine what shore of thought you walk each day; it must be a soft white dream of all ...
gorgeous thing
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too much of you spills over into every breath of light and life. ...and moreover trans.fixed by that em[blem]bold.(p)en(n)ing.. ..
i cant imagine what shore of thought you walk each day; it must be a soft white dream of all ...
gorgeous thing
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(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D