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Snake Bite
by Southern Comfort → (All Poetry by Southern Comfort)
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Embracing a Viper, causes a painful Snake Bite.


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To sleep with a Viper for the night,
Your reward will be, a Snake Bite.
As you allow the Viper to coil around your body good and tight,
Soon fangs with sink in deep for a Snake Bite.
Slithering predators, cold to the touch,
Give you a walk on the wild side, you want very much.
You Fool, you tried to charm what can't be tamed,
Now you lay bleeding and mamed.
Beguiled by attraction, blinded with loss of sight,
Now you must embrace the sting of Snake Bite.
You kept your eyes on the swaying entity,
It possessed your mind and let the darkness free.
It's forked tongue hissing pretty lies,
Causing sanity to whisper good-bye.
As the Viper whispers," Lay with me tonight"
You willingly surrender to, SNAKE BITE!



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 Reviews of "Snake Bite"
Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on July 8, 2008
Come to my parlor said the Black Widow spider, but Viper shouldn't invite an old croc to lay with her any night when her bite can pierce through his cynical scales.

Georg

Reviewed on June 29, 2008
This is such a compelling heart stopper SC!
I loved it! and it's true!

Write On!
Warm Hugs and Spiritual Love, Warrior Purple Passion Lady Sheexooo

STay Positive!

Reviewed by Walt Hardester
Reviewed on June 25, 2008
Darkly compelling poetry, SC. I am so glad to see you writing again Honey pie.

~W~

Reviewed on June 23, 2008
SC this is dramatic poetry, compelling and dark.

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on June 22, 2008
Snake bit in the truest sense and oh how deeply it can scar one's soul, viv and very passionate write.....

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed on June 22, 2008
SC,

Powerful comparison - with a warning - well done -

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on June 22, 2008
Interesting comparison of a one night stand lover to a snake and yet I guess the main difference in a good one night stand and a bad one is all in the conversation before and after. This one made me think about that, for if you meet someone really great and make love and have a great time the man or woman was sweet but if they turn out to be loussy lovers and demanding and rotten assholes the next morning then we tend to feel used...hmmmnnnn

Fee

Reviewed by victoria hitchcock-courville (Reader)
Reviewed on June 22, 2008
um, wow, well what can you say to that crazy snake bite plight! i guess you just couldn't help yourself, but i liked it, it was really in the now.


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