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Spoken Silence
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Silence is golden, but is it really?


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Spoken Silence

by Amber "V" Moonstone

8/30/10

I am silenced,
by the absence of you,
darkend by the choice
of spoken silence.

Coolness of evening
captures the silence,
returning my mind
toward heaviness of solitude.

Heart and soul,
flounders within this silence
searching for safety
on distant shores.

Once again, wondering
why silence has overtaken
the world of sand and sea,
perplexing moments of clarity.

Stumbling toward development
of seeping seaweed
ravaging mindless thoughts
of spoken silence.

Under-developed ties,
makes connections less possible,
perhaps it's the way it is meant to be
within this spoken silence.

"Spoken Silence" (c) Amber "V" Moonstone


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 Reviews of "Spoken Silence"
Reviewed by Dark Knight (Reader)
Reviewed on October 3, 2010
sometimes silence can be a blessing in disguise-being filled with so many things we tend to forget the importance of being still and waiting for things to fall gently into place-in our stress filled lives I think silence is a missing ingredient we all need to get back to

Reviewed by Brandon Petit
Reviewed on September 15, 2010
A very cool poem. I especially like the mentions of the sea/ocean in this one... "distant shores", "sand and sea" and even "seeping seaweed" stand out to me. The second and third stanzas are my favorites. Interesting how you made somewhat of an aquatic theme out of this one, without including anything about sea or water in the title... I like that.

Reviewed on September 3, 2010
What a beautiful open hearted poem. It has a very classic feel to it Amber.

Reviewed by David Maclellan
Reviewed on September 2, 2010
Beautifully written verse Amber. It impels contemplation of the various complexities of silence, from the joy of solitude to the underlying reasons of things not spoken.
best regards
David

Reviewed on September 1, 2010
I can put a big wow on this Amber, a joy to read, cheers

Reviewed by Don Juan Amante
Reviewed on September 1, 2010
a beautiful mysterious but endearing reflection of love amid the silence.

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on August 31, 2010
So much can be said without even a word, connections tell more..this is a great poem Amber..loved it!!!

Reviewed by Dayvid Graybill
Reviewed on August 31, 2010
Silence can be disheartening at times of indecision, or when it comes from someone when feedback is needed. It can also be a time of cleansing. Your poem portrays some uneasiness with silence. Good write Amber!

Peace,
Dayvid

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on August 30, 2010
For me, Amber, this is so haunting and moving, an inner turmoil and yet with control and with great beauty in the writing.

John

Reviewed by Christine Tsen
Reviewed on August 30, 2010
I love this, it is so beautifully written!
Silence can be a prison, and I am convinced ranting and raging can be so much kinder at times.
Your poem is wonderful! It can comfort and console ~ some use silence from darkness of their spirit. Of course silence is also heavenly of course, but your poem has import and flows!
Blessings,
Christine

Reviewed on August 30, 2010
silence can cause confusion and assumption. (sometimes) which you wrote about so effectively. (I like the picture). :) - Morgan

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on August 30, 2010
Silence has a dual personality; it can be heavenly in the right time and space but it can also be deadly and grow like a cancer. Thank you for sharing this thought-inciting write, Amber. Love and best wishes,

Regis

Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on August 30, 2010
Silence can be good or hurtful, they say absence makes the heart grow fonder but then it can make the heart grow weary too. Another great write Amber.

Newfie hugs, Rose

Reviewed on August 30, 2010
Amber,

Sometimes silence can be more hurtful than anything. You've portrayed this strange emotion in your poem so well.

Mary

Reviewed on August 30, 2010
silence is a treasure to me
it is in our personal quietude we (at least me)
can find all the clarity we need for our self
if others share with us-wonderful
if they cause turbulence...let us have a crab boil
and make use of the seaweed :)

Love's Buoyancy & Bounty
Vickie


Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on August 30, 2010
Oh my ,as always sweet lady... Beautiful writing from a beautiful woman with such a loving heart...sure have missed reading you ...but I am back..LOL..stay safe and well..Hugsss..much love to you always
Love,
Chanti Lace

Reviewed by Liana Margiva
Reviewed on August 30, 2010
BEAUTIFUL POEM!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on August 30, 2010
intriquing-i like this

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on August 29, 2010
It all depends on the type of silence it is, doesn't it? Silence is not "always golden," as they say. Excellent writing, Amber.

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on August 29, 2010
Last verse seems to carry the answer. Splendid poetry.

Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)
Reviewed on August 29, 2010
This is incredible writing! Philosopical and visual combined for awesome effect. Brilliant!

Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater
Reviewed on August 29, 2010
Quieted season, silence must have its reason...this poem makes a lot of sense and also dangles in something not clear, Amber...sometimes when chaos infiltrates, shores do become distant because the whole purpose is then off from the original design...it's a riddle for sure and think about it...be well.

Love,
Sage

Reviewed by TONY NERONE
Reviewed on August 29, 2010
Sometimes Dear One people stay quiet because they are not sure they are overstepping there boundries. Maybe that is the cause of silence.

GOD BLESS YOU with Love
TONY


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