Broken/Mended (poem) by Amber V Moonstone on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope)

Reviewed on September 17, 2012

Mended thoughts, pain released. Fantastic verses.

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart

Reviewed on August 22, 2012

Amber I like this as much as anything I've read lately. Esp. that last verse is just wonderful.

Reviewed by Christine Alwin

Reviewed on August 21, 2012

I always love the 'mended' part! :)

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg

Reviewed on August 21, 2012

music collaboration - very kewl! broken then mended inspires the optimism of life

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on August 20, 2012

So much meaning in such a deceptively "straightforward" format and delivery, Amber. This is what will make them such powerful lyrics and I really hope to see them performed in Brooklyn one of these days! Well done to both of you and rock on! :)) xx

Reviewed by Clarence Prince

Reviewed on August 20, 2012

Indeed a lovely poem, Amber, nicely written, I like it. Blessings to you!!

Reviewed by D. Vegas (Reader)

Reviewed on August 20, 2012

Amber, I love this and the way you set it up...Another one to add to your top 10!!

Deborah

Reviewed by Laura Fall

Reviewed on August 19, 2012

These words are so deep and very meanigful Amber as a broken heart many can relate to at one time in their life. A great poem indeed and how wonderful that your daughter is putting lyrics to this , Amazing talent she has Laura

Reviewed by Lily of Lough Neagh C. Dennis-Woosley

Reviewed on August 19, 2012

Amber this truly does sound like something wonder that can be set to music. It talks about the heartache of love and resignation and how well it is overcome.

Bravo

Love and Light
Lily

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on August 19, 2012

sounds like great lyrics to a song ...

Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger

Reviewed on August 19, 2012

Amber ~
A beautiful melody from poetry of a sweetheart.
I am elated that this will be on your daughter's CD.

Lady Mary Ann

Reviewed by Dark Knight

Reviewed on August 19, 2012

so i guess if the record become Gold you will get a percentage of the profits for being the songwriter??-Well Done Amber

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on August 19, 2012

i agree-this is an awesome poem!

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on August 19, 2012

Love the ending and quite a poetic melody.

Reviewed by John Domino

Reviewed on August 19, 2012

Very nice poem Amber!
Your daughter is a shining light and will be a talented delight.
You and she will form a team in which songs are created from mother's dreams.

Amen!

Reviewed by neerja gandhi (Reader)

Reviewed on August 18, 2012

That's wonderful...putting music , :) best wishes,neerja

Reviewed by Vivian Dawson

Reviewed on August 18, 2012

Like Mother...like Daughter
talented and creative....
written lyrical for the soul

Lady Vivian

Reviewed by Amor Sabor

Reviewed on August 18, 2012

Love the happy ending/last half of verses. Excellent as usual.
Amor

Reviewed by RWE SAYS BYE (Reader)

Reviewed on August 18, 2012

Good rhythms, sound sense in terms of content, resonant and rich... nicely done, Amber!

Roger