Amber,
To a heart so beautiful. Lovely the gift will be to your soul.

Lady Mary Ann

oh so beautiful!!!! sail swiftly. ~ Morgan

This is marvelously genuine, and I'm teary just reading...understanding.
So emotionally resonant Amber, and I also love Kate's comment below which is as I feel it too.
Blessings, xo
Christine

well not sure what you are looking for but as always you write with such romantic passion that whoever is the object of your fiery desire is one lucky guy--well done

beautiful work, Amber ...

I love the metaphors and certainly, your verses touch my soul as I can completely relate to what you are expressing and sharing through your verses, Amber. Thank you. Love and best wishes to you,

Regis

Will that delivery ever happen?
Is there no hope of discovery,
can I live without ever knowing you?
I do not believe my heart can sustain.

Each day, each week, each month,
flies by as if one fleeting moment in time,
life is so precious, so beautiful,
but more so because you came into my life.


These are especially lovely verses at the heart of a poem that remains intensely centred in its lovelorn longing and emotional fervour. The sense of that "squeezing" of feeling into the smallest of boxes is very felt and the effect is as if witnessing something precious being constantly, lovingly, wrapped and unwrapped in the finest of tissue, awaiting its time to shine. Yes, just even one glimpse of the Beloved, one brief meeting is perhaps all it takes to be satisfied... and to know. Maybe therein also lies the risk, but I'm sure the bravery you speak of has already considered and conquered that fear. This is totally melting, Amber, in its appreciative reciprocity of the giving and receiving of life's most beautiful gifts: love. xx

Absolutely beautiful poetry that warms the heart Laura

beautiful beautiful poetry amber

Quite some delivery!

Softly and Tenderly
is your beckoning
*Amber V* leaving
me wanting it to be

Lady Vivian

You give me a sense of longing for that love to come ashore all tied up in a beautiful package of your dreams.

Ron

i so hope the sender sees and hears this and the package is delivered that you wish to get and wait for
budd

Yes. You got your point across, Amber, LOUD and clear.

ROMANTIC AND BEAUTIFUL POEM!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva