This poem is worthy of much more than a single reading; and the photo is most complementary to the verses. Thank you for sharing this offering, Deborah. Love and peace to you,
I found this to be an intriguing piece...especially when combined with the art....the art is softly sensual...erotic even...the verse raggedly sharp...especially that beautiful and dynamic ending couplet.
The layers of meaning here are varied, which I find to be a benchmark for good verse.
It leaves questions in the mind.
Splendid work Deborah...Welcome to the den. I will be looking forward to more of your work.
My book of poetry is being redone by me, I have a beautiful cover designed and the book will have a few more than 200 poems in it. I am going to have it printed on demand here in Canada. When it is done I will let you know when it is done and if anyo
A further collection of poems, many from years in the Middle East, but also the California San Francisco and Central Coast areas (Santa Cruz, Carmel, Big Sur, Berkeley, etc.).
If you tend to believe romantic, passionate, masculine poetry is a thing of past eras, read "She Intrigues Me," and be swept away in the beautiful craft of a contemporary poet of love.
Regis
The layers of meaning here are varied, which I find to be a benchmark for good verse.
It leaves questions in the mind.
Splendid work Deborah...Welcome to the den. I will be looking forward to more of your work.