Will this ever Stop ? (poem) by Christine Alwin on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Jms Bell

Reviewed on October 20, 2009

FANTASTIC! JUST GOES TO SHOW HOW THE SIMPLEST THINGS CAN TOUCH THE POET'S 'GIFT' TO PRODUCE POETRY. THANKS FOR SHARING AND BLESSINGS.
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain

Reviewed on December 13, 2008

Hello Christine,

I love the image and this well-defined poem; as always, you say so much in so few words . . . !!

Hugs,

Lance

Reviewed by Mary Patterson

Reviewed on July 19, 2008

Much is said in a few lines. Hopefully all is alright by now!........M

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson

Reviewed on April 4, 2008

Clever writing, Christine! A lot said in few words...one of my favorite things in writing!

Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed on November 18, 2007

Profound and wonderful... "Will this ever Stop?" Shines.

In admiration,

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by Rose Rideout

Reviewed on October 20, 2007

Well Andy got a lot out of this Christine, a lot in a few short words. thank you for sharing.

Newfie Hugs, Rose

Reviewed by Staci Gansky-Wagner

Reviewed on October 19, 2007

Very cute--nice and creative :) Sometimes it stops

Reviewed by Jill Eisnaugle

Reviewed on October 19, 2007

Short, sweet, and to the point, Christine. Well done!

Jill

Reviewed by William Heffner

Reviewed on October 17, 2007

Good write, I don't think it ever stops, but I believe it gets better.

God Bless You and Your Loved ones

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on October 13, 2007

eventually it does ... eventually it does ...

that is until it begins all over again ...

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on October 13, 2007

A short and excellent write Chris
Well Penned
Picture gose well hand in hand
Peace & love be with you

William

Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green

Reviewed on October 13, 2007

C o o l !! Awful lot said in that handful of well-chosen words!!
Now sit down and put your head between your legs. Gonna be fine, 'k?
All rootin' for ya !!! Hugs+++, 'Pea'

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on October 13, 2007

Ah, but you didn't WANT to be released . . . You needed the strings . . .

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on October 12, 2007

Even if the string isn't there anymore, it will never stop, because when it does our hear will be beating no more.
Georg

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on October 11, 2007

Short but you get the point across, Christine. Love and peace,

Regis

Reviewed by Kathy Armijo

Reviewed on October 11, 2007

Whew! An emotional upheaval truly feels like a spinning top. Thankfully, with God it can stop.
Kathy

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on October 10, 2007

i like the cleverness of "no string attatched" - well written

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo

Reviewed on October 10, 2007

Nicely written with an undertone of a double meaning, enjoyed....

Be safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling

Reviewed on October 10, 2007

Enjoyed this my friend, there is a season for all things and a reason, eventually all things do come to an end...enjoyed this much! Well done!
Blessings,
Joyce B.

Reviewed by Christine Alwin

Reviewed on October 10, 2007

OH Noooo ,, Now Andy is Dizzy,,, will this ever S-top ??? LOL

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on October 10, 2007

Hang on a mo lass, I'm having trouble just getting two grains of salt... Like me, you write in the first person, yet this is not about you... But now you have asked for it....
1...2...3 And singalong... yup ur fault!!! LOL

Dizzy,
I'm so Dizzy, my head is spinning
Like a whirlpool, it never ends
And it's you girl, making it spin
you're making me dizzy

The first time that I saw you, girl
I knew that I just had to make you mine
But it's so hard to talk to you with fellas
hanging 'round ya all the time

I want you for my sweet pet,
but you keep playing hard to get
You're going round in circle all the time

Dizzy,
I'm so Dizzy, my head is spinning
Like a whirlpool, it never ends
And it's you girl, making it spin
you're making me dizzy

Finally got to talk to you,
and I told you just exactly how I felt,
Then I held you close to me,
and I kissed you, and my heart began to melt

Girl you've got control of me
'Cause I'm so dizzy, I can't see
I need to call a doctor for some help

Dizzy,
I'm so Dizzy, my head is spinning
Like a whirlpool, it never ends
And it's you girl, making it spin
you're making me Dizzy, my head is spinning
Like a whirlpool, it never ends
And it's you girl, making it spin
you're making me Dizzy

I'm Dizzy

I'm Dizzy

Like a whirlpool

Dizzy

Dizzy

Dizzy

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on October 10, 2007

Not as long as He has anything to say about it. Well done Angel. 13 hugs from NH

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on October 10, 2007

Clever spin on the s-top;-)Enjoyed this!

ET

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on October 10, 2007

(((((Christine)))))

Powerful.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Charlie

Reviewed on October 10, 2007

When you're dizzy, the best thing to do is to get as grounded as you can, and breath--breath deeply.--Charlie

Reviewed by Charles Keller

Reviewed on October 10, 2007

Sometimes it's hard to see the forest for the trees. Time will help and the pain will ease.

Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)

Reviewed on October 10, 2007

I believe all things come and go for a reason..perhaps for us to grow..and perhaps for us to aquire the knowlege we need for future circumstances. All my best, love holly

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on October 10, 2007

Most things stop eventually, probably whether we want them to or not.

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on October 10, 2007

Poweful write; hope all improves for you. Very well done!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :(

Reviewed by Walt Hardester

Reviewed on October 10, 2007

All things must pass. This too.

Walt