Upon a Star (poem) by Christine Alwin on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on August 30, 2009

A sailors dream
Beautifully composed
Love & peace

William

Reviewed by Goddess Love (Reader)

Reviewed on August 29, 2009

A heavenly write.

Reviewed on August 24, 2009

Oh, what a day this is! First, I learn a new trick in the reading of
your poem, "Dance of Flame," and now I think I'm learning to think "out of the box" by surmising that if there's a mermaid and she's thinking of "him," then there must be a merman.

But, no,I didn't get there first. "Merman" is listed in my dictionary right below "mermaid." So, though I learn another new trick, I'm still in my old rigid box trudging along as an "also ran."

Innovative and original! Love it.

Richard

Reviewed by Mary Patterson

Reviewed on August 21, 2009

Oh to dream the impossible dream and have it come true! Great poem...M

Reviewed by Annabel Sheila

Reviewed on August 11, 2009

Beautiful imagery, magic...I felt like I was floating as I read your poem. Lovely.

Anna

Reviewed by Jon Willey

Reviewed on August 11, 2009

Christine, this is marvelous work -- romantic and such creative expression my friend -- a haiku with tenderness -- peace and love --Jon Michael

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on August 9, 2009

How thouroughly lovely, Christine. Thank you for sharing this beautiful dream. Love and best wishes to you,

Regis

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on August 8, 2009

hopefully dreams that will shine brightly through the fog ...

lovely poem, Christine ...

Reviewed by John Domino

Reviewed on August 8, 2009

Sweet dreams in poetic fashion. Bravo!

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on August 7, 2009

Nice, very nice senryu, Christine. You take what is inside you and sends it into the hearts and minds of your adoring fans. Lovely.

Reviewed by neerja gandhi (Reader)

Reviewed on August 7, 2009

ahhh...sooo very sweet.. Best wishes . Neerja

Reviewed by Gene Williamson

Reviewed on August 6, 2009

Christine, perfect wedding of visual and haiku.
Dream on. -gene.

Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse

Reviewed on August 6, 2009

Christine.... "Upon a Star" is sweet, tender, & endearing to moments of lovers-even in dreaming....
Peace, Love & Inspirations
Vickie

Reviewed by Michelle Mead

Reviewed on August 5, 2009

Ahhh, this makes me dream- I would love to be a mermaid :)

Reviewed by ~ H (Reader)

Reviewed on August 5, 2009

Hi Christine, I see that
we were having the same
dream last night. ha...
good dreams there were,
love the poem & pic.

Love Holly

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone

Reviewed on August 5, 2009

Christine,
First the photo so perfect and beautiful. Your poem, so tenderly soft and passionate. I want a dream lover too! Wonderfully written.
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on August 5, 2009

Christine, you are very photogenic in your sleep...

Georg

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on August 5, 2009

Lovely, Christine; both poem and pic.

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson

Reviewed on August 4, 2009

Heavenly romantic, Christine.

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on August 4, 2009

Beautiful, m'lady.

Reviewed by John Flanagan

Reviewed on August 4, 2009

Christine,
Tender, touching and just lovely.

John

Reviewed by Dale Clark

Reviewed on August 4, 2009

beautiful! oh, to dream

Reviewed by Emile Tubiana

Reviewed on August 4, 2009

Dear Christine, I like this line "asleep beneath blanket of fog" as we all are asleep beneath a blanket of fog. And rare are those who see the stars. Verty nice and sweet. Love Emile

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on August 4, 2009

lovely and soft

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on August 4, 2009

... the night light in her eyes! :)) Sweet dreams indeed, Christine! xx

Reviewed by Cindy Tuttle

Reviewed on August 4, 2009

Beautiful words and picture Christine. Makes me want to day dream.

With Love,
Cindy

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on August 4, 2009

Her long lost sailor

Reviewed by Carole Mathys

Reviewed on August 4, 2009

Just lovely...

Carole~

Reviewed by Lori Moore

Reviewed on August 4, 2009

Very pretty.

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on August 4, 2009

Beautiful in image and verse; exquisite!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Jms Bell

Reviewed on August 4, 2009

LOVELY...IMAGERY IS VERY GOOD. THANKS FOR SHARING AND BLESSINGS.
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on August 4, 2009

Although you may not post often Chrissie,when you do the wait is well worth it, this one captures the imagination and with the imgaination the heart. It is like a soft voice whispering in the night and the graphic of the mermaid is a perfect match up for this one.
hugs
fee