True Moon (poem) by Christine Alwin on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Sheri Uy

Reviewed on January 22, 2010

Another perfect ku, Chrissie (may i call you that?) Warm and playful. Simply beautiful.

Love and blessings,
Sheri

Reviewed by Phoenix Rox (Reader)

Reviewed on December 7, 2009

U are a haiku Queen. So powerful, crisp and precise. Excellent.
Love,
Rox. :)

Reviewed by Jon Willey

Reviewed on December 2, 2009

Christine, a marvelous point of ku -- peace and love to you my friend -- Jon Michael

Reviewed by Jms Bell

Reviewed on December 2, 2009

THE MOON...THE AGE OLD SECRET HIDING PLACE FOR THE THOUGHTS OF A COUNTLESS NUMBER OF HEARTS...NEVER RAINS ON ANYONE'S PARADE...JUST LISTENS. GREAT WRITE DONE SO VERY WELL. THANKS FOR SHARING AND BLESSINGS. JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by Michelle Mead

Reviewed on November 30, 2009

Lovely.

Reviewed by Douglas Bentley

Reviewed on November 30, 2009

Intricate. . . .
Revealing. . . .
Leaving a whisper of hope.
ENJOYED READING

Doug

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling

Reviewed on November 29, 2009

Beautifully written my friend...so much said between the lines, thought provoking. Enjoyed this much.
Blessings from Ky.
Joyce B.

Reviewed by Robin Ouzman Hislop

Reviewed on November 29, 2009

The moon inspires many haiku, but this one's there, exact...v nice

Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle

Reviewed on November 29, 2009

This is very beautiful.Nice ku.take care

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on November 28, 2009

So effectively created, Christine; and the graphic image that you have chosen most effectively complements your words. Love and best wishes,

Regis

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on November 28, 2009

This is truly so beautiful and secrets are best that are held in the heart and I know there will always be someone's arms always be there to catch you when you trip. Your love flows into each word and line..thank you for offering this poem today.
fee

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on November 28, 2009

Oh, I so adore this - beautiful! Well done, Christine.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone

Reviewed on November 28, 2009

Christine, what a lovely ku, tripping is sometimes really good!
So much in so little, I love the middle line: secrets sprawled beneath the moon, You can trust the moon, it never tells anyone's secrets!
Good photo choice also. A job well done once again.

Much peace, love and light,
Amber "V"

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson

Reviewed on November 28, 2009

Oh, Christine, you've left much for me to imagine! Beautiful!

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on November 28, 2009

Oh boy! I love the hell out of this little ditty. Gives the mind plenty of room for exploration in these passion-packed three lines.

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on November 28, 2009

Christine
I truly enjoyed this gem
Thanks for sharing
Love & peace

William

Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse

Reviewed on November 28, 2009

...ahhh..."Tripped over my thoughts,"
I love this Christine "True Moon" glows
and shines on you too
Peace, Love & Inspiration
Vickie

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on November 28, 2009

Oh! those secrets sprawled beneath that moon...

Georg

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on November 28, 2009

Though provoking indeed, Christine. Beautiful too. God bless.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on November 28, 2009

A most intriguing 'ku, Christine.

Reviewed by Stephen Cherring

Reviewed on November 28, 2009

I find this so critically short! The thing is..Its so very good, It needs/begs' to be continued. This isnt a critic talking, rather an impatient reader waiting for the next chapter. So where is it? lol'
hurry.
Regards Steve Chering'himslef'

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on November 28, 2009

Pretty haiku, Christine; well done! Love the piccy, too!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by John Flanagan

Reviewed on November 27, 2009

Christine,
So right these images.

John

Reviewed by Cindy Tuttle

Reviewed on November 27, 2009

This is great Christine.

With Love,
Cindy

Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)

Reviewed on November 27, 2009

Wonderful Ku. Great imagery.