Between Two Worlds (poem) by Christine Alwin on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on March 22, 2011

Full of sensuality; I visualize a mermaid, or just someone who cannot choose between two worlds.

Axilea

Reviewed on March 16, 2011

Oscar Wilde would be proud of such a poem.
This has the potential of an amazing story.
"Breasts afloat" can't think why but that bring to mind my breast, I mean best visuals. xx :)

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart

Reviewed on March 16, 2011

So mystically beautiful

Reviewed by Amor Sabor

Reviewed on March 16, 2011

Christine, there is an ethereal and sensual beauty to this piece and the image which precedes it fits it perfectly. The beauty of that girl tugs at me...I know not of which hand it beckons. My painting hand or my writing one...they are both inspired so.
Amor

Reviewed by D. Vegas (Reader)

Reviewed on March 16, 2011

Christine, Beautiful!
Aways,
Deborah

Reviewed by m j hollingshead

Reviewed on March 14, 2011

well said

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on March 13, 2011

Such beautiful images grace this poem, Christine, that we can totally see and feel this sea-angel, life-like and natural. Soft and tender, we feel her pain - and her ultimate relief. This conjures very intense feeling as we enter into her world. So real. And lovely. xx

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on March 12, 2011

a poem between two worlds of angelic beauty, Christine!

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone

Reviewed on March 11, 2011

Oh how tenderly you have written this sad poem, makes me cry.
Beautiful in all ways!

Much peace, love and light,
Amber

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo

Reviewed on March 11, 2011

How deeply moving as you reach out to the sanctity of angels. Very beautiful...

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on March 11, 2011

Such a wonderful and soul-reaching creative piece, Christine; your words enter my being. As for angels, I do not know where I'd be today if they had not saved me along the way. Thank you for sharing this gift. Love and best wishes,

Regis

Reviewed by Morgan Merriweather

Reviewed on March 11, 2011

The imagery is so great in this, easy to feel like you live in many places. -Morgan do you rememberthe movie "splash" ?

Reviewed by Jon Willey

Reviewed on March 11, 2011

A marvelously crafted analogy Christine. Tender with compassion and understanding. The mermaid, an enigma that symbolizes our quest to join beauty with our need to endure anywhere. I bid you love and peace my dear friend. Jon Michael

Reviewed by John Flanagan

Reviewed on March 11, 2011

She is the beauty we dream and the struggle
we endure, Christine, in finding happiness.
Your imagery is delicately crafted but with
strength and passion.
This is fine writing.

John

Reviewed by TONY NERONE

Reviewed on March 11, 2011

Very lovely sentiments expressed in this sad excellent poem.
Love and Peace
Tony

Reviewed by Chessly Nesci

Reviewed on March 11, 2011

Angels always have our backs when we need them!! I felt so many emotions while reading your words. Sea legs and running where the wind blows really hits home! Sometimes things just aren't meant to be...That is when you let God take over...I love Mermaids and you write about them so well my friend! Hugs! ~Chessly

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on March 11, 2011

�s an old sailor and true lover of the sea and all things in it including mermaids, I read this at first as the opening verses seemed to be sad but than when the wind began to blow, and she seemed to have found a rescuer (perhaps with his sea salted kisses) found her finally at peace I smiled knowing wishes can come true. A truly beautiful write Chrissie, I love it.
hugs
fee

Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)

Reviewed on March 11, 2011

a bird and a fish can fall in love, but where will they make a home? this is excellent writing christine. enjoyed.

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on March 11, 2011

Very creative and imaginative, Christine. Excellent piece.

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)

Reviewed on March 11, 2011

Oh my very beautiful writing sweet lady sighh...Hugsss

Reviewed by Christine Tsen

Reviewed on March 11, 2011

This is glorious!!!
It does batter and bruise a mermaid to be caught between two worlds.
The spirit is always aching to bridge the two worlds, wanting a happy ending. Such a brilliant poem!
Blessings,
Christine

Reviewed by Douglas Bentley

Reviewed on March 11, 2011

My thought was being set free and at peace would make her HAPPY!
"Caught between breeze and sea" - Great Line
Loved it all.

Doug

Reviewed by John Bidwell

Reviewed on March 11, 2011

Heart piercing write-
So much death this morning- and too much of it real.
The waters are not kind.
Very touching- haunting photo-
We do get caught between two worlds.

John

Reviewed by neerja gandhi (Reader)

Reviewed on March 11, 2011

ohhh..sad but good write Christine. Best wishes.neerja

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on March 11, 2011

Many sailors hearts went with her
Unique and enchanting.

George

Reviewed by Liana Margiva

Reviewed on March 11, 2011

BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by Annabel Sheila

Reviewed on March 11, 2011

This is simply beautiful, Christine! Your choice of phrasing is enchanting! Loved it!

Hugs,
Anna