She stepped into rhythm of his lead,
maracas shook with movement of hips,
sand between toes and incoming tide,
an ocean that thirst, for just a taste,
of this red hot salsa that lit the sky,
heated by wind, burning through night
Christine, a romantic cha-cha with margarita lips -- you have moved romance into a new venue with a vivid color of verbiage -- I bid you joy, love and peace my dear friend -- Jon Michael
An erotic dance in the sand, hips swaying. Hot salsa poem! Fantastic imagery, dynamic words. Left me wanting to escape to the beach to have a salsa moment of my own!!!
WHAT GRABS ME IS THE ENORMITY OF THIS SCENE...DELIVERED WITH PERCISELY THE MINIMUM AMOUNT OF PHRASES THAT LEAVES THE READER NO ROOM TO HAVE TO IMAGINE ANYTHING. AN EXCELLENT WORK, CHRISTINE, SO WELL DONE AND ENJOYED. THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS.
Your words bring the imagination to life Chrissie. Reading this one can hear the wind, feel the grit of sand beneath bare feet, taste the salt brine on lips and tingle as naked skin connects to naked skin. Masterfully done Chrissie...love it.
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fee
A further collection of poems, many from years in the Middle East, but also the California San Francisco and Central Coast areas (Santa Cruz, Carmel, Big Sur, Berkeley, etc.).
My book of poetry is being redone by me, I have a beautiful cover designed and the book will have a few more than 200 poems in it. I am going to have it printed on demand here in Canada. When it is done I will let you know when it is done and if anyo
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GOD BLESS YOU, PRETTY LADY
Tony
Much peace, love and light,
Amber
Be careful of what/who lurks in the water ;)
Joy L. Hale
Hugs,
Anna
admirable control in your expression,
Christine, each line with maximium impact.
Yes!
John
Rich in style, and grace, and with a beat of vibrant rhythm!
Love,
Christine
Left me sunburnt and parched
Thirsting for a few more drops
This will shoot to the TOP 5 - instantly.
db
as You do Soooo Well!!!
Lady Vivian
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fee