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Betrayal of a Man
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Betrayal of a Man has been published in A Life Beyond Limits: Overcoming Private Pain
Your Word says the servant is not greater than the master So I bare the pain of being betrayed by a man� A man who I planned to live happily ever after again, But like a snake He bit me with his venomous bait I wish I can escape The deep pain of the being betrayed by a man A man, the one who I vowed to love, honor, and cherish, The one who I married� I believed he was the one; Even so, I carried both of his sons I never felt such heartbreak; It hurts so bad... I never imagined it would come from my mate� You said in Your Word, you would not put more on me that I can bear, But the pain of betrayal seems to never end You say You sticketh closer than a friend So I say to You today LOVE me�my friend The One who will never betray The One who will be there till the end Copyright �2007 by Nataki Suggs

Reviewed by Paul Shakespeare (Reader)

Reviewed on August 27, 2007

In spite of The Ultimate Betrayal(one's own spouse); there's still all the JOY, LOVE, PEACE and HAPPINESS that this LIFE HOLDS.--(even the thought of being in ANOTHER RELATIONSHIP <smile>
So go on with your life; allow time for the healing process, and you'll come out STRONGER and WISER (You already have...)
I believe that was TD Jakes that said, "We all get "thrown off a cliffs in our lives". Bust just REMEMBER; GOD is always there to CATCH US! <smile>

Have a Blessed Day!
Roger

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on July 20, 2007

Powerfully meaningful and emotive; than you for sharing this offering, Nataki. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by William Heffner

Reviewed on July 16, 2007

Wow this is powerful, well done. I have found that imperfection is always difficult until you get to know the grace and mercy of perfection.

Thanks for pouring out your heart.

God Bless You and Your Loved Ones

http://www.myspace.com/barraheffner

Reviewed by Art Hernandez

Reviewed on July 14, 2007

Very nice...the release of emotional pain evident within this poetic display of yours...along with the accepttance of it's reality and the true thoughts of love embraced with the one true love that will never leave one...

within pain...

nicely penned release of emotion..

enjoyed.....Art Sun...