Dawn, this wonderful write had all the characteristics of soaring. I could feel the wind rush by as I read. Wonderfully done.
Allen
Reviewed by Al Swanson (Reader)
Reviewed on September 9, 2004
Hi Dawn, I loved that aspect of the Phoenix arranged in the equation too, there all the while, and along with all of it, so many opportunities to rise, al
Your ending is a great start and you have captured the physical weakness with your "exhausted" language and format. Another attention-grabbing and unique write from you, Dawn. Love the battle between extreme physical weakness/battle-weariness and resiliance of spirit/hope and determination here. You have a gift for being able to express great profundity and breadth with economical and eye-catching style. Also like the way you are able to express "affairs of the heart" with such ingenious metaphors: Your writes are special! TY Kate xx
This is so incredibly well composed,
may you find your starting place and
keep rising.
warm hugs
Elga
Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)
Reviewed on September 9, 2004
Dawn, a well-penned poetically balanced composition illustrating one’s quest for and to have harmony. An excellent creation, Poet. Thank you for sharing it. Take care and be well.
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Allen
"Forgive, embrace
some starting place"
I love that and of course it's all
some great verses. Brava!
JD
This is so incredibly well composed,
may you find your starting place and
keep rising.
warm hugs
Elga
Flows with poetic mastery - this is one exceptional write!
Robert
you reach the starting place you so long for!
"Falling, falling.
Blind once, you see.
Love found us out,
fear led to doubt.
So, too, do I
understand this:
Though one dream dies,
phoenix will rise."
Excellent lines!
Peter