Dawn, this is an extremely well-penned poetic emotive composition my gifted friend. Unfortunately, some days are easier than others, yet the most important thing one can do, is just put one foot in front of the other and forge ahead. Thank you for sharing your remarkable talent and timeless treasures. Take care and be well.
Flows with poetic excellence - this is another example of your great talent!
Robert
Reviewed by Al Swanson (Reader)
Reviewed on September 15, 2004
I think oiu are so very very right in this write Dawn, i does take only a minute to completely revamp the whole thing, nd be settled on a diferent path, very good and reassuring thoughts I felt expressed here Dawn, al
love the flow and rhyme in this one, and i know how you feel...we struggle and never seem to get ahead...keep strong, and pray for me, too...having it rough, myself
(((HUGS))) and love, karla.
brilliantly, creatively penned! BRAVA!
Reviewed by Susan Barton (Reader)
Reviewed on September 15, 2004
A single second could change my course,
open new perspective –
alter past, amend
my life defined.
Wow! So true - best to stay the course with positive mind
Dawn I sense the tug of war struggle, and I hope you are kind to yourself, for it is a life-long path of dualities ahead. the hope is in your attitude which shows you have what it takes and know in whom to trust! God is our best hope and we should never forget that. Man can never deliver what He can.I love your poetry, you are full of talent and have many gifts, concentrate on these,while you struggle to meet lifes demands.
Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on September 15, 2004
Open minded prespective is a great thing to have as shown in this write.
Asa D Seeley, a young Afro American man, shares his struggle to leave his past behind as he reaches for his future. In his one-of-a-kind style, he searches for answers...from the visible & invisible. A Memoir in Poetical/Prose form.
At the young of age of seven, Jill's mother Eve takes her for regular sessions to a child psychologist for treatment of her anxiety, which only makes her behavior worse. When she reaches her teens, she starts drinking and then smoking marijuana with
Sepsis knocked her down and out. Faith, hope, and gave her the strength to get back on her feet. I am a Runner She fought the river of death They said she'd never run again
She proved them wrong...
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Flows with poetic excellence - this is another example of your great talent!
Robert
love the flow and rhyme in this one, and i know how you feel...we struggle and never seem to get ahead...keep strong, and pray for me, too...having it rough, myself
(((HUGS))) and love, karla.
brilliantly, creatively penned! BRAVA!
open new perspective –
alter past, amend
my life defined.
Wow! So true - best to stay the course with positive mind
sueb