Schlossenfuss (Children) (poem) by CJ Heck on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on October 21, 2006

Oh easy just use perment perm lotion comb it in to straighten it and follow the rest ending with the nutralizer....works better than straightner!!

I know it works did it to hundreds of other people...and the cheapest way to do a little goes a long looooong way!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on October 21, 2006

I can relate. Cut me hair, was tired of how it looked, didn't have the money to get it professionally cut, and now I look like a boy...........yipe. Should have left well enough alone. A humorous poem, CJ, wonderfully constructed and penned. BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on October 21, 2006

It's so true, not only children, but also adults can relate to this one.

You have done wonders with your children's poetry!!!!!

Sandie Angel a.k.a. Sandie May Angel :o)

Reviewed by Chanti Niven

Reviewed on October 20, 2006

This has to be a hit among your target audience but it appears that adults love it just as much. I admire your work.
Chanti

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on October 20, 2006

You are so in tune with your subject! This is excellent
and many youngsters (and moms)can relate to it. fine work
as always CJ...ET

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on October 20, 2006

Too adorable, CJ; too adorable! Thanks for the grins today; very well done! BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your Texas friend, Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on October 20, 2006

LOL I did! Cute write again.

Fee

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling

Reviewed on October 20, 2006

Love this...I think I had this kid in my classroom a few years ago...came to school every day with this monsterous head of hair...I mean everywhere, and then one day he came in and it was...well it was gone! He had cut it and then had to have it shaved into a burr..he was still cute, but I hardly knew him...loved it hadn't thought about that little guy in a long time...Your wonderful!
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling

Reviewed by H. Lena Jones

Reviewed on October 20, 2006

Cute, CJ! Now, I know what it's like to have hair like Schlossenfuss...at times it made me cry when mom tried to get those sneaky knots out. So to save poor Schlossenfuss all that fuss, I would suggest a low haircut would be good, plus he would be right in fashion too. :)

God Bless
LOL
Lena

Reviewed by KJ McPhee

Reviewed on October 20, 2006

No, keep your hair Schlossenfuss! It's a creative mess/mop.

My da advised me to train my hair. Now my follicles are standing up
like a wire brush ready to sweat it out in the gym. :-)) Very amusing, CJ. Regards to the hairy one.

Reviewed by Taylor Ryan

Reviewed on October 20, 2006

To cute CJ...first cousin to a friend of mine... Fuzzy Wuzzy..
"Fuzzy Wuzzy was a bear.
Fuzzy Wuzzy had no hair.
So Fuzzy wasn't fuzzy
Was he?"
I'll give my Mum credit for that one as she never told me anyone else to give copyright rights to!

Personally, mine wouldn't curl if I begged it...but cut it off...no way Jose!

Love my friend,
Taylor xo

Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)

Reviewed on October 20, 2006

I believe there's some gadget that with heat it could straighten hair. Poor Schlossenfuss!!!! Victor

Reviewed by alejapoet@aol.com Bennett

Reviewed on October 20, 2006

You are a kool layed back writer and I admire your creative style and imagination..

Reviewed by Rusty Daily

Reviewed on October 20, 2006

Well CJ, you know I wouldn't shave it off. If he did, poor Schlossenfuss would have to go out and buy a footsie wig to keep his feet dry. And, I don't want a sloppy footed schlossenfuss sloshing around the house. Would you? ROFLMfurryAO
Ain't we a pair?
loveya
Rusty

Reviewed by Shinya Yawakazi (Reader)

Reviewed on October 20, 2006

This is a funny poem^^

Reviewed by Dove JoAnne Cromp (Reader)

Reviewed on October 20, 2006

You have the cutest little child like muse!!! PRECIOUS!!

Xxx dove