I think we were both on the same track this past week...
writing~ in the grammatical stanz...
and Love~ in every sense!
I love your versions CJ!
Love and Peace~
Kimmy
Well said--tell others to mind their own business--especially when it comes to affairs of the heart. At least, I think that's right...Maybe I could use a few pieces of advice in the romance department! LOL!
Great write,
Wendi
Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)
Reviewed on November 11, 2006
Great lesson that comes up on you with a flash, but so true. Victor
That is for sure a lesson in the grammar of love, a merging of tenses, pronouns and verbs. You, CJ, are clever for sure to exercise our gray matter with such twists and turns. Thank you, precious friend. :)
A romantic wordsmith who exercises the heart muscles to love.
Susan
Reviewed by J M (Reader)
Reviewed on November 11, 2006
Love is so beautiful whe it is true... One of the creators greates gifts is love. Your poem radiates of flowing rhyme of love. Beautiful Job CJ!!!!!!!!!!!
C-J Sweetie~ I love it and it's a keeper, to my Vault it goessssssssss!
Since the you, of the we, love me,
and the I, of the we, love you,' - This was a great touch, you had me reading that one over and over.... I love what Andy wrote! he is awake! Love is Grand and it's plan can be scammed, you must keep it Strong, so nothing goes Wrong! hey, I like that... Love your poem C & J... Thank you! PEACE and Light! WArm HuGs, SheeeXOOX P.s. Also Thank you for the Sweet terms of endearment you left me on my corner of the den. Your so Sweeeeeet! ;)
I think the striking thing I see in this poem is, grown-up can surely appreciate it, but it is written so it's almost a playground sing-song verse. The word play at the last is brilliant o'talented one.
loveya
Rusty
Oh wow! This is a wonderful and most romantic write...it is also full of loving wisdom that all "we's" need to heed. I love your line...
and with devotion and passion,
melds them into a we
these lines melt in your mouth as sweet tasting candy, this is just how love truly is...Beautiful write from a beautiful soul.
Blessings my dear friend,
Joyce Bowling
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writing~ in the grammatical stanz...
and Love~ in every sense!
I love your versions CJ!
Love and Peace~
Kimmy
Great write,
Wendi
ET
God Bless
LOL
Lena
Susan
Since the you, of the we, love me,
and the I, of the we, love you,' - This was a great touch, you had me reading that one over and over.... I love what Andy wrote! he is awake! Love is Grand and it's plan can be scammed, you must keep it Strong, so nothing goes Wrong! hey, I like that... Love your poem C & J... Thank you! PEACE and Light! WArm HuGs, SheeeXOOX P.s. Also Thank you for the Sweet terms of endearment you left me on my corner of the den. Your so Sweeeeeet! ;)
"Since the you, of the we, love me,
and the I, of the we, love you,"
But, I GOT IT!
Said with a grin by...Micke
Chanti
you have scribed into the perfection
of a beautiful poem, "love is what life is made of"
Peace & Love
William
Love Tinka
loveya
Rusty
Let all our influences be of the we persuasion; always causing us to look inwardly, towards that love.. we have received.
Most-beautifully written verse, CJ, laced with your gentle wisdom.
Love & Hugs,
Rhonda
and with devotion and passion,
melds them into a we
these lines melt in your mouth as sweet tasting candy, this is just how love truly is...Beautiful write from a beautiful soul.
Blessings my dear friend,
Joyce Bowling