Photo by Nina Lakota
A taste from my upcoming book "When a Woman Loves a Man"
...stay tuned
When you said my name
and held my hand
when you touched my face
and kissed my lips
when you told all your friends
that I was your girlfriend
and that I may be the one
when you called me late at night
to say goodnight for the one hundredth time
when you went down on one knee
with that ring you made by yourself
when I said yes, when we said I do
when you carried our daughter in your arms
and saw me in her eyes
when you stayed
even when it was easier to let go
when you saw my flaws
and called them beautiful
when you say my name today
and it feels like the first time
when you touch my face
and kiss my lips...
I am with Richard on this, this is so tender & moving
& this is love...when love can see us in all lights of life...and still see our beauty, it is priceless feeling
Love & Inspirations
Vickie
He call one hundred times. He say his love many times. This poem is a beautiful poem about real love. The man telling his woman about love is very good. You write so very well, form, structure and feeling. A poem minus and problems.
A rose and no thorns is a true wife. Beautiful.
You captured the beauty of true and everlasting love in this one Bernice and with lines such as number nine about saying good night a hundred times and line thirteen about carrying your daughter and seeing you in her eyes, say sooooooo much. Beautiful poetry.
Enjoy twists and surprising turns in this erotic collection of sexy love stories based on seven classic fairy tales. There are romantic interludes to touch your heart and plenty of scorching sex to warm your coldest nights.
& this is love...when love can see us in all lights of life...and still see our beauty, it is priceless feeling
Love & Inspirations
Vickie
Hey, any man who can do this to you is definitely a "keeper."
I love it, Bernice!
Richard
As always, your lines breathe love into us all. --Charlie
Regis
This one ranks right up there with the rest.
Uniquely you! Can't wait to read the book :)
Love you,
Auntie Cathy
very romantic
Love & peace be with you
William
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
In Spirit,
Bear
Cryssa
A rose and no thorns is a true wife. Beautiful.
An ode to real love, true and lasting; this is delightful and warms the heart and soul.
John
Be always safe,
Karen
hugs
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