elemental (poem) by Debby Rosenberg on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on February 15, 2009

To look into ones inner self and see whats with in is really hard to do. Exploring new consepts and visions can take one to new heights. The poem is very deep and inciteful....M

Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle

Reviewed on February 12, 2009

Deep,beautiful and passionate poem.I enjoy reading it,Great picture Kimmy,take care

Edwin

Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson

Reviewed on February 11, 2009

A worthy write, Debby! I'm saving this to my library! Thanks!

Reviewed by Art Hernandez

Reviewed on February 10, 2009

Nicely penned....your expression give us that view into the depth of thoughts, where one can find a multitude of imagery. All we need is to stop and grasp the essence of life, to really feel and sense the soul, the mind, and the spirit of our own creativity. Life is but the moments we take to explore her.

Nice...

Art Sun...

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on February 10, 2009

"thinking less and feeling more" certainly seems the way to go, Debby. Back to basics and to the elemental of who we are should set our sights a bit straighter and curb our out-of-control maniac thinking that has for too long exalted the intellect over intuition, placed mind over matter. Like Felix, I like your different styling here: suits the premise well. xx

Reviewed by Michael Guy

Reviewed on February 10, 2009

Despite appearances WE are spiritually evolving upward; this poem is like a candle showing the way - in fact it looks like a candle stand in form - perhaps intentional. Kimmy is one heck of an artist. A shame we can't size pictures as we please here... I'll check out her photo blog.
Nice to see people working together on AD
Later, michael

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on February 10, 2009

Wow...you certainly diverged from the usual with this super reflective write that makes us all stop and think about our own life spiritual journeys. You didn't just write outside the box you broke the box down and put it out for recycling...well done Deb

hugs
Fee

Reviewed by D Johnson

Reviewed on February 10, 2009

Debby, on so many levels this is a great piece of writing. I like this verse particularly well:
"a pulse arrives
a shining sun
an ache and tingle
shattering conceptions
I�m thinking less
and feeling more
imagining the world
beyond"

Cheers and peace,
Dan

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on February 10, 2009

Yes, Kimmy IS from another planet, if not she couldn't possible tell us so many marvelous things, that like this poem get the spirit tickled with whispering poetic words.

Georg

Reviewed by Dale Clark

Reviewed on February 10, 2009

Powerful pen... that last stanza is awesome,
really the entire poem is... loved it.

Reviewed by Kimmy Van Kooten

Reviewed on February 10, 2009

You and I must of been on the same plane this past week, I drew this picture and named it "Elementally Wise" and, after reading your poem, I don't know if I could write anyone better to depict my art. Check it out, you name the heart, the air, the puzzle pieces, I was moved by your work! You are more than welcomed to post it with your poem, if you want...
I will save your poem with this drawing, always...Thank you for sharing this fine and moving pen..."elemental"

Love and Peace~
Kimmy~

http://s134.photobucket.com/albums/q99/kimmyvk/?action=view¤t=dodoandowlsjpg2.jpg

Reviewed by Walt Hardester

Reviewed on February 10, 2009

Yes, above all we are this......

we are spirit
bodies of the light

~W~

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on February 10, 2009

i love the depth of thought here--a beautiful realization lies within your words

Reviewed by Paul Judges

Reviewed on February 10, 2009

Nice work !

Reviewed by Tony Jenkins

Reviewed on February 10, 2009

Yes I need to think less, feel more and mingle with the dreamers.

Always a pleasure.

Take care Tony