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holding me together
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so tired of being f***ed
oh honey, not by you
I think you're the only
thing holding me together
reminding me of things
I believe
reminding me, yes
everything will pass

as the tidal wave hits
and pulls me under
that suffocating feeling
the pressure to breathe

and a handful of meds
thins the blood
keeps the heart pumping
and gives willing to live
to face the challenge
and overcome
the tire of earthlife

i lay within your tattoo arms
pull you close and know I'll forget
whatever it was I was lost in








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 Reviews of "holding me together"
Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
Reviewed on September 29, 2003
Boy this Is Different!?

TRASK

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on September 29, 2003
I love the art and this is painful yes I am with Eileen thank God there is one there also...
Peg

Reviewed by Bobbi Duffy
Reviewed on September 29, 2003
Intensely powerful and raw emotion that pulls the reader's heart into it.
Bobbi

Reviewed by Dolores Dawes
Reviewed on September 29, 2003
Wow, the emotional impact is enough to knock one off his/her feet! Great Job! Dolores

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on September 29, 2003
Intense and powerful emotive write Debby!!

love Tinka

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on September 29, 2003
Powerful write!

Reviewed by Kevin Mc Crum (Reader)
Reviewed on September 29, 2003
Raw feelings, very good write!

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on September 29, 2003
powerful emotion in this outstanding write...


Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on September 28, 2003
Powerful line, an intense poem.

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on September 28, 2003
Thankful you have someone to lose yourself in...hope all is well;-) intense ennui!


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