... prose disguised with line breaks, nothing more.
I thought of you the other day
A face in the crowd reminded me
Something about his eyes
And the shape of his shoulders
The kind of man you might have become
If you had not been the man you are
It is rare for me to imagine you
So long without a word
And your silence was perfectly clear
My leaving was exactly what you wanted
Leaving makes me look like the bad guy
Leaving shows which of us is stronger
And it has taken strength to keep going
Raising your boys has not been easy
Wonderful smart talented funny
Beautiful to look at and angry as hell
Because nobody wants to help raise
Another man’s sons by a strong woman
Boys need men, but enough about that
There was something about this man
And he was watching your son do the triple jump
Your son, who has no memory of you, did 37’10”
And I thought how proud you might be
If you had been strong enough to care
..Aamie my dear friend..I live with the father of 'my sons' but that fact does nothing to make him care..thus your leaving the father of your sons was wise indeed..why? You have given yourself back to you..and your sons? ..They don't really need their father..for you have obviously been both...you see Aamie..mine have their's in their life but he is not of it!!..so in the end what our boys need is LOVE that's ALL!!
much love to you my friend..your poetry is always perfect in its conception and delivery...thankyou!!
Vesna oxoxo
Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)
Reviewed on May 7, 2003
Aamie this is so full of meaning and sentiment...lovely heartfelt free verse!
~Nikki~
hey, if my "another man's daughters" married your "another man's sons" we'd have the making of a sit-com ... or something ... excellent honest write, like seeing ghosts
this really moved me
I will be thinking about this all day
Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on May 6, 2003
Poingnent free verse, Aamie.
Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
Reviewed on May 6, 2003
Nails in his heart.
Reviewed by ConradFV (Reader)
Reviewed on May 6, 2003
Fine looking happy lads you have there in the picture. Great pride spiced with finely powdered sighs in and on those lines. Thanks for the share, good Lady [cum strong Woman].
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very well,
cynth'ya lewis reed
much love to you my friend..your poetry is always perfect in its conception and delivery...thankyou!!
Vesna oxoxo
~Nikki~
Just excellent,
Reindeer
I will be thinking about this all day