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Dream Within A Dream
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While I sleep an indescribable powerful force is with me and suddenly I am dreaming in my dream. Watching my body writhe, feeling my arms and legs move, wanting it to control me but only when I say Looking at myself floating above, pushing up and down trying to be one with me. Should we join and forces and share this together? Perhaps not. Perhaps separately, we can each create the most intense current of electricity and come together to experience the quintessential unification I am ready to surge ahead but she wants to prolong the inevitable. She thinks that I am the one who wants to hold out while she wants to hurry Things slow down. We are drifting apart. I begin to rouse - feel myself stirring. She's calling to me. "We are not finished" I slowly go back and watch and experience her sensations as she begins to moan and climb her way to the top I’m watching her dream my dream I feel what she feels. I speak what she speaks I hear her voice and it's my voice. Body and soul separating but each able to experience their own, and then bring it all together as one. My middle quickening until I hear my own choppy cries of ultimate release She whirls...whirls, and sinks into the cave of my entire being, then gently closes the door. Two in a dream A dream come true � Copyright Jan 2002 MS

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Reviews of "Dream Within A Dream"

Reviewed by Melissa Rives

Reviewed on April 24, 2003

Captivating write...beautifully expressed!

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)

Reviewed on April 24, 2003

A dream in a dream...quite unusual and a good write...floria

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on April 24, 2003

This was so excellent, Love the mysterious and beautiful poem,

Reindeer

Reviewed by Digital Fairy

Reviewed on April 24, 2003

Whoa...so awesome... this says it all:

"Perhaps separately, we can each create the
most intense current of electricity and come
together to experience the quintessential
unification .."

Talk about intellectual stimulation!

--Karissa

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on April 24, 2003

excellent decription of the lucid dream state...

Reviewed by Christine Morell

Reviewed on April 24, 2003

An enthralling dream. This is fabulous Marilyn
Chrissie

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on April 24, 2003

Marilyn, excellent poem. This was a communion of kindred souls.

Reviewed by uppalapati Prasanthi

Reviewed on April 24, 2003

great expression to a wonderful dream.

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)

Reviewed on April 24, 2003

Dreaming while dreaming, sounds like you have been taking B12, I started dreaming that I was under the legal age of late.

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on April 23, 2003

An incredible experience
Excellenet dreaming thoughts

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)

Reviewed on April 23, 2003

Very mysterious and sensual. Love it.

Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)

Reviewed on April 23, 2003

The title grabbed me.....A Poe fav of mine. This was great... a real treat for the senses...ty, Dani

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on April 23, 2003

wow! What a journey this dream was...mysterious and sensational at the same time! Great write Marilyn!

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