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Fated
by Eileen Clemens Granfors → (All Poetry by Eileen Clemens Granfors)
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He was right there in front of me. (We're about to celebrate our 21st anniversary).
ps--That other woman was his roommate's fiancee. (whew, good thing!)


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Hearts broken, we looked across the balconies

Of our facing apartments, each barren in a different way.

He thought, "Whoa, she yells a lot (teenagers in the house, red flag);

She likes country music? And sports! Always with a tennis racket,

A basketball, jogging around.

But she's so routine-oriented.  You could set your clock by her

Comings and goings. And she burns the midnight oil.

I wonder why? But hey, she's blond and kind of cute."

I thought, "Look at that tall man! The red hair!

Oh, he must be married, there's a woman over there.

He cooks on his grill, he drinks a lot of beer.  He plays his music

SO LOUD.  He probably has no ear drums left.

But I see how he watches the stars, and that he talks to people

Just because, and gee, it would be nice to have a friend, someone

Besides the teens I teach and the beloved teens I parent,

Someone who could make my heart do flip flops.

My heart, it's been dead a long, long time."

And he said, "Hello."

And I said, "Hi."

And it wasn't long before we asked,

"Where have you been all my life?

You are not me, but you complete me.

A puzzle piece, whether the first or the last,

Here we are, together. Amazing.

 

 

 


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 Reviews of "Fated"
Reviewed by David Clure
Reviewed on December 23, 2010
I love stories of redemption with their happy endings; especially the true ones...this is a very intimate and full of life poem that made me cheer! Very well done Eileen.

Z.B.McClure


Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on October 18, 2010
Sure hope you two have something good plannned for the celebrations!!
Happy Anniversary and may you share many, many more....

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Patrick Granfors
Reviewed on October 18, 2010
Sweet fate provided the first turn of our little rubic's cube, a puzzle with endless possibilities and one perfect solution, us. Love, Patrick

Reviewed by D Johnson
Reviewed on October 17, 2010
Eileen, a totally stunning write.

Cheers,
Dan

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on October 17, 2010
Agreat story and a great life lesson...we don't have to be the same to love each other...
fee

Reviewed by Christine Tsen
Reviewed on October 17, 2010
Disarmingly enchanting and sweet ~
A touch of perfection within the folds of life.
More pictures!!! (please)
Best Wishes for a happy anniversary,
Christine

Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater
Reviewed on October 17, 2010
Such a true to heart poem, Eileen. Here's to 21 more plus a few for your Golden. Patrick is special in so many ways so this is a cherished moment you share here with your readers on AD. Thanks.

Love,
Sage


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