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Careless
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Shards of my love are littered around me

I try to clean them up and put them back in order

My trust is over by the door-broken into small pieces

My desire has been stomped on by a passerby

My beauty has been distorted and it is almost unrecognizable

I am tempted to get a garbage can and just dump the whole mess into it without a second thought...

Then the prospect of what almost was evolves into what could be and I reconsider my decision

Maybe someone will be patient enough to help me piece together the mess that you have just created.

Just maybe it can be pieced together and treated gently, lovingly and with care


Maybe....

 
 


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 Reviews of "Careless"
Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson
Reviewed on August 12, 2005
Ah, I like this write, Jam! It speaks of rebuilding from ruin! Good job!

Reviewed by J. Allen Wilson
Reviewed on August 9, 2005
Through love and commitment, even the most shattered of lives can be pieced back together.
well written emotional piece.

Allen

Reviewed by Denise Edwards
Reviewed on August 9, 2005
A charming piece, Blackberry! One feels the deep pain and hope.
Well done

Reviewed by Sandra Mushi
Reviewed on August 8, 2005
Lovely write, Blackberry! Full hope.

God bless,

Sandie.

Reviewed by Zenith Elliott
Reviewed on August 8, 2005
excellent...nicely done!

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on August 8, 2005
Hope shines eternal in love and romance and we can never give up on our hearts.

Felix

Reviewed by June Thompson (Reader)
Reviewed on August 8, 2005
this is a great write
I love how in the end your beauty and hope shown through
well done


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