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Lines of Reality
by Tracey L Hardie → (All Poetry by Tracey L Hardie)
  
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Lines of Reality

Intentions of simplicity
etched lines
barring reality,
fantasies commenced
desires of the heart.

As time passed
the lines faded
to a faint memory
of a birth, a beginning.

Words unsaid
spilled in gushes
to puddles of awe
evaded with silence.

Rejoice to sorrow,
unsure of direction
we stumble within,
lost in the moment of truth,
we crossed into reality.


Copyright 2002 Tracey L. Hardie

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 Reviews of "Lines of Reality"
Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on August 21, 2002
realioty certainly has its benfits...

Reviewed by Kay P Devenish
Reviewed on August 20, 2002
Great lines here.

Reviewed by Cathy Montgomery (Reader)
Reviewed on August 20, 2002
Crystalline expression--pure beauty!!

Reviewed by Chris Stevens (Reader)
Reviewed on August 20, 2002
great write!!!
hugs,
Chris

Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson
Reviewed on August 20, 2002
nice pic and the words so clear and to me fresh.....thanks for sharing this

Reviewed by Amor Sabor
Reviewed on August 20, 2002
Excellent work Tracey!! Very masterfully created piece. I love the accuracy of your words.
Amor

Reviewed by Masarat Daud (Reader)
Reviewed on August 20, 2002
'Painting the true picture' like they say. Very good work!

Reviewed by Steve Patterson
Reviewed on August 20, 2002
Powerful. excellent poetry. capturing that moment when infatuation faces reality. good job tracie (as always)

Reviewed by Sailor Neptune (Reader)
Reviewed on August 20, 2002
Fantastic write... paints alot of reality..


Reviewed by Lori Moore
Reviewed on August 20, 2002
Excellent work... beautiful ending.

Reviewed by Gumby
Reviewed on August 20, 2002
Ahhh but what is reality and what are dreams
how fine is that line
as it is at the mercy of our own senses.

So please tell me am I real
or am i just a toy.
Batteries not included

Reviewed on August 20, 2002
Great picture. It reflects the story line so well. Very well done. Tim

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on August 20, 2002
Tracey I really like the simple depth of this poem, it says so much of love's progression in only a few well chosen words. The pic is perfect for it.


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