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I Thank God foe the Rain
by Mitzi Kay Jackson → (All Poetry by Mitzi Kay Jackson)
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*for a friend
(accepting/visting a child not sure whether he is the father finally saying
I love her regardless she is mine)
*bless you love and peace my brotha












Poem Artwork

Time after Time
You’ve appeared in my mind
Just a seed
Planted
Being grown as I
Unsure of what I was seeing
What I was knowing
You’ve appeared in my mind
Growing…..just a seed
The weeds be my ego, my male pride
Another thing stuck in my mind
Growing……and the rain came down
Today’s struggles…..and the rain came down
Young black boys dead and in jail
Young black girls bellies swells
….and the rain came down
….and the rain came down
Mothers’ and fathers’ not doing so well
……and the rain came down
So much confusion in life it-self
And you deal with the hands you were dealt
….and the rain came down down down
The weeds died
And you blossom on with much pride
In my eyes
Rene from this day regardless of how legacy plays
Nature says “your seed is growing, and she needs to be knowing”
And then the rain came down
And the love I have inside embellishes my male pride
….and I thank God for the rain

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 Reviews of "I Thank God foe the Rain"
Reviewed by Walter Jones
Reviewed on June 8, 2005
Ah, pure magic, nothing better can be said..Walt

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on June 5, 2005
you images flow like the rain that refreshes our souls ... great write ...

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on June 5, 2005
Great symbolism and most powerfully meaningful creation, Mitzi. Thank you for sharing this offering. Love and peace to you. Regis

Reviewed by E. Richardson
Reviewed on June 5, 2005
exceptional work here...good to see your work again, Mitzi

Reviewed by Aberjhani
Reviewed on June 4, 2005
This is a beautifully compelling womanist interpretation of a masculine dilemma: to serve or not to serve as parent to a child who may or may not be one's own. Committing oneself to such a spiritual, emotional, and financial investment in the life of another is not an easy decision to make, especially when issues of inherited biological traits or disagreements with the co-parent may eventually come into play. It's an honor to salute both the poet who gave us this wonderfully humane write and the man who inspired it.
Aberjhani

Reviewed by Cyrus Webb
Reviewed on June 4, 2005
just breath-taking! I absolutely love this piece.

Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson
Reviewed on June 4, 2005
Nicely done, Mitzi! I've missed your poetry!

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on June 3, 2005
A beautiful, feel good poem. Majestical, Mitzi...

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
Reviewed on June 3, 2005
Excellent--Read My: In Balance of Life It's Called a Sacrifice...

TRASK

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on June 3, 2005
Sweet and sincere.

Ron

Reviewed on June 3, 2005
Mitzi,

Welcome back; I've missed you and your powerful words. Touches all of the right places and heals all of the wrong--thank you. Well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :(

Reviewed by Nordette Adams
Reviewed on June 3, 2005
Beautiful, Mitzi. We dealt with a situation like this in my family. I was proud of my brother for taking on responsibilities despite not being sure. The woman was playing a game and the truth came out, but that didn't change the loving motivations and dignity of my brother. His heart was in the right place. A touching penning, Mitzi. ~~Nordette

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on June 3, 2005
Uplifting beautifully written poem Mitzi! I've missed you!;-)

Love,
Eileen

Reviewed by Sara Coslett
Reviewed on June 3, 2005
Excellent poem Mitzi. Rain has a way of cleansing everything. ~ Sara

Reviewed by KJ McPhee
Reviewed on June 3, 2005
i think it's rained poetry today, Mitzi! excellente! k

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on June 3, 2005
You put much soul in your writes
Always a joy to read your work Mitzi

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on June 3, 2005
So impressive is this that I am a lack for words, sweet write.....

Felix

Reviewed by Tyrone Banks (Reader)
Reviewed on June 3, 2005
Excellent and well said!

Tyrone


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