Oh, say can you (poem) by April Robins on AuthorsDen

Oh, say can you
by April Robins → (All Poetry by April Robins)
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Well here I am again trying to rhyme. This is a work in progress. Please send me an e-mail if you can think of words that could be added. Anything that starts with "Oh, say can you". Let's see how far we can go.
Oh, say can you see a little thing like me Oh, say can you hear me call you Mommy dear Oh, say can we look inside the children’s book Oh, say can you smile and stay for a while Oh say can you give as long as you live -------------------------------------------------------------------------- (by Diana Wiles) Oh say can you love like a sweet Turtle Dove Oh say can you sing like a bird on the wing Oh say can you roam yet always come home -------------------------------------------------------------------------- Oh, say can you walk as fast as you can talk Oh, say can you teach my mind how to reach Oh, say can you deal with the sadness I feel Oh, say can you prance like the pony wanting to dance Oh, say can you doubt or do you know what it is all about Oh, say can you kiss my heart with such bliss Oh, say can you doodle a cute fluffy poodle Oh, say can you hark to the call of a lark Oh, say can you whine when we start to dine Oh, say can you jump over the great, big hump Oh, say can you dive into everything you strive Oh, say can you baulk at the words that I talk Oh, say can you dream about the moonbeam Oh, say can you flitter regarding the puppy litter Oh, say can you taste without making haste Oh, say can you whistle when you’re lost in the thistle Oh, say can you whittle words down that are brittle Oh, say can you vision the life you’ll be given Oh, say can you tug my arms for a hug Oh, say can you chug the water from the mug Oh, say can you dash through the crowd for some cash Oh, say can you dare to let down your hair Oh, say can you wonder about the sound of thunder Oh, say can you swing as good as you can sing Oh, say can you ring my phone a ding-a-ling Oh, say can you save these words that I gave

Reviewed by Lois Christensen

Reviewed on June 24, 2008

Good original and nice write. Reads easily and let us go through our memories ourselves of days gone by.

Reviewed by Diana Wiles

Reviewed on March 18, 2008

I like this..I like its progression...it reminds me of a wonderful Patchwork quilt of memories....Love, Diana.