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Do-Over
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Might wanna check out the link. And I am particularly interested in hearing how men react to this poem. To me, "she" could easily be "he." But would it be better to write a poem of this nature from a strictly male pov? But. . .whadeyathink? Happy Spring, my Friends, Pea <3


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             Do-Over


Age grew and sharpened like a pebble,
too small to locate in a shoe.
Her heart was singing treble
but bass notes kept leaking through.



Some days she felt like a hyena,
laughed-at and maligned.
Other days were serener,
but take your freaking cheese and wine.


Why am I not wise? she asked herself.
What have I learned? Anything at all?
Why can’t I just lie back on the shelf
where society wants me to stall?


Who am I these days, anyway?
I used to walk fast and look smooth.
Who belongs to this wrinkled face?
Where did I misplace my youth?


Back from volunteering, she checks her mirror
and notices a rather new her.
Her smile and wink are much clearer.
She could positively purr.


Her hair is definitely silver.
Her humor comes back with a snap.
No way will she cry into her pillow
when her punch-lines are still drawing laughs!


In a flash, she is busy and engaged.
Literally and figuratively, a woman of her age.


 


(c) Phyllis Jean Green, Spring, 2004


 


 


 


 


 


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 Reviews of "Do-Over"
Reviewed on April 4, 2004
Hi Phyllis...if it weren't for my children's reminders I would never know how old I am. I think life progresses naturally and that you are only as old as you allow yourself to be. I love this very natural write. It was excellent. P.S. Where does Pea <3 come from? And is that the name you prefer - Pea?

Reviewed by Simon Thurlow (Reader)
Reviewed on March 30, 2004
I think that aging disgracefully sounds much more fun actually LOL

Great write Phyllis

Reviewed on March 30, 2004
We learn to accept aging gracefully when we overcome the arrogance of the youth.

Reviewed on March 21, 2004
There's nothing more beautiful than to grow old with grace. Love this indeed.

~ May Lu a.k.a. Sandie Angel ~

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on March 21, 2004
Phyllis,
This is excellent accepatance and grace.
beautiful poem.

Lady Peg

Reviewed by Tami Ryan
Reviewed on March 21, 2004
This is wonderful, Pea. Well expressed.

Hugs!

Reviewed by Eddie Thompson
Reviewed on March 21, 2004
excellent poem...i comment on the same theme on my page in a poem called "Unique Beauty"...you've done it very well.


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