so perfectly worded

NO ONE CAN LIVE ON THIS EARTH PERFECTLY. BUT YOU ARE RIGHT IN THAT WE ALL CAN 'TRY'...AND THAT'S WHAT IT'S ALL ABOUT. THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND PEACE...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

It was never about you and I dear Ron but unfortunately we make it so more often then we should, we try. Soul humans that we are, often we fall short, but that's oka, he loves us anyway, thanks for the poem xo

Ron,
Beautiful and thought provoking.
Shervin

Responsibility!

Always,
Deborah

So why are we so selfish?
So why don't we feel free?
What is it about us?
That makes us not see?

I really "understand" what you are expressing through your verses here, Ron. There is much meaningful meaning in your words. Love and peace to you,

Regis

One can interpret your well-written poem on so many levels.

You do hit the nail on the head when it comes to human nature. Well done Ron.

I am not about anymore, TV,
But I read many books & that is me,
But your point herein I do see,
Glad am I that to see it,
You do not charge any fee...-e-

What a great write. So true.

Ron,
Yes, you have said a mouthful. This poem rings so true to me!
The series was amazing. You should watch it.
Have a wonderful weekend!
Peace, love and light,
Amber

Amen, brother. Now that's a poem. Well written and with a meaning that strikes home. Very introspective. John

Yes...victimization is a rampant dis-ease in this country (and many other parts of the world). Far too many indulge in a solipsistic and narcissistic mind set, seeing nothing but the mirror image of themselves, and then refuse to take responsibility for themselves, blaming any discomfort on others. I, for one, have spent the majority of my adulthood choosing to believe we create our own reality, i.e., whatever happen to us in on us and is such a reality because it has a lesson to teach and possibly an epiphany or two to bestow. Your poem is very well stated. Now, if only more could access it.

So cool!! You are right on this one, Ron. It's a shame more people can't see it this way.

Love ya!

Jane