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Now you see, Now
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       Now you see, Now
 
Eyes right!.  Eyes left!  Eyes
forward, arms at rest!  Now
you all see that for every Have,
millions scratch their way up
Topsies,  'home'  a  shack, a
carton, a shelter.  Across the
tracks, in the gulch,  own fault,
bound to be.  Only talking First
World.  (Third too grim to go.)   
Sure, lucky souls report growing
up poor in a genteel vein.  Seems
those taking care helped them
make light.  Yes, and others,
weak with want, are born under
weights heavy as anvils.   Kind
of poor hollows with hunger, rage,
and undeserved shame.  Half-naked,
rest rags.  No, or forever sliding down
socks.  School no pen,  no paper.  
Fee, you are putting me on. Book
out, computer another joke?
Talk about Stranger Danger.  No
privacy, little water, and it is cold.
Short on soap.  Shiver or melt down,
down, and down.  Feel like grit-gray
ice sculpture or kindling tossed
without thought into fire.  Point,
no point.  Fate washes A through L  
in gutters, M-N-O genie to Rodeo
Drive.  Rest sweep under a bridge
or underpass, or are forced to
dive in dumpsters in cat-or-rat
alleys.  X-Z survive wombs that
are running on Empty or drugged
past caring and pestilent births
only to be shot by 12- and 13-
year-olds conscripted to fight
to the death for no cause, or
worse.   Dismissed!!

 

(c) Phyllis Jean Green, 2008

 

 

 


 


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 Reviews of "Now you see, Now"
Reviewed on June 28, 2008
Phyllis - This awesome poem is sad and true
filled with a depth that many are still of knowing!
The gloominess of this world is still showing!
YOur unique style befuzzles my brain, I love it - I really do, I want more...
Your chosen words I aspire too!
Write On!
Warmest Blessings and Inner PEACE, Warrior Purple Gyspy Passion Sheexoooo

STay Positive!

Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on June 5, 2008
Too many know what this was all about Phyllis. Thank you for sharing.

Newfie Hugs, Rose

Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green
Reviewed on June 3, 2008
Fee, luv, it is a reference to school fees. So many these
days! One can be impossible! Sorry it I didn't make it clear. No way would I do or say anything to offend you!!
Love your review. . .as always. I, too, know how it feels. . .not to be starving, but to go hungry and without proper clothes. Only lasted a couple years, but you never forget. Insecurity stuck in my case. Suspect it does in others'.
Sure glad you spoke up about the Fee. Only capitalized because
it begins a sentence.
Love always,

Pea

N: Thanks to all of you for your moving responses. Gonna post a light'n next. 'Speck we can all use it. HUGS!!

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on June 3, 2008
Bare bones write and capture of the reality of poverty, I grew up poor in a world, though a lot less violent, still knowing the pangs of hunger, need, sadness but I guess we had one thing more we had family love and that went a long way. Today's endulgence by the majority of us (and I include myself in that catagory) is nothing short of shameful.

Fee

Not sure if the use of my nick name Fee in there was intentional and if so I didn't understand...

Reviewed by John Leko
Reviewed on June 2, 2008
...excellent write of those...lost...are those riding high above the sidewalks...so far removed...never slipping through the cracks.
excellent work...hard feelings and fine poetry Phyllis...
John

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on June 2, 2008
Your words ring very true for so many these days. The forgotten ones that some turn away from while sipping on their champaigne, artfully stated....

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on June 2, 2008
A tirade for tortured souls that breaks into
the comfort zone of all who live in denial
Excellent work, Pea!...ET

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on June 2, 2008
such a stark write profound in its truth

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on June 2, 2008
Help us all..
Stay safe
Ron

Reviewed by Elizabeth Price
Reviewed on June 2, 2008
Them that has don't care about them that don't unless it is shamed into them. Bravo. Great write. Liz

Reviewed on June 2, 2008
Powerfully penned heartbreak, Pea; God help us!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :( >tears! <

Reviewed on June 2, 2008
Heartbreaking reality for far too many - and it's only getting worse, I'm afraid - tragic commentary - very acutely penned and felt - well done -

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Gianetta Ellis (Reader)
Reviewed on June 2, 2008
Wow. My brain is trying to keep up with yours in this piece - I've read and re-read. Despite the subject matter, which is heart/spirit-wrenching, you have a wonderfully unique style that keeps us coming back for more.

Reviewed by Gene Williamson
Reviewed on June 2, 2008
God bless the free world.

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on June 2, 2008
Sad commentary.


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