Now you see, Now
Eyes right!. Eyes left! Eyes
forward, arms at rest! Now
you all see that for every Have,
millions scratch their way up
Topsies, 'home' a shack, a
carton, a shelter. Across the
tracks, in the gulch, own fault,
bound to be. Only talking First
World. (Third too grim to go.)
Sure, lucky souls report growing
up poor in a genteel vein. Seems
those taking care helped them
make light. Yes, and others,
weak with want, are born under
weights heavy as anvils. Kind
of poor hollows with hunger, rage,
and undeserved shame. Half-naked,
rest rags. No, or forever sliding down
socks. School no pen, no paper.
Fee, you are putting me on. Book
out, computer another joke?
Talk about Stranger Danger. No
privacy, little water, and it is cold.
Short on soap. Shiver or melt down,
down, and down. Feel like grit-gray
ice sculpture or kindling tossed
without thought into fire. Point,
no point. Fate washes A through L
in gutters, M-N-O genie to Rodeo
Drive. Rest sweep under a bridge
or underpass, or are forced to
dive in dumpsters in cat-or-rat
alleys. X-Z survive wombs that
are running on Empty or drugged
past caring and pestilent births
only to be shot by 12- and 13-
year-olds conscripted to fight
to the death for no cause, or
worse. Dismissed!!
(c) Phyllis Jean Green, 2008
filled with a depth that many are still of knowing!
The gloominess of this world is still showing!
YOur unique style befuzzles my brain, I love it - I really do, I want more...
Your chosen words I aspire too!
Write On!
Warmest Blessings and Inner PEACE, Warrior Purple Gyspy Passion Sheexoooo
STay Positive!
Newfie Hugs, Rose
days! One can be impossible! Sorry it I didn't make it clear. No way would I do or say anything to offend you!!
Love your review. . .as always. I, too, know how it feels. . .not to be starving, but to go hungry and without proper clothes. Only lasted a couple years, but you never forget. Insecurity stuck in my case. Suspect it does in others'.
Sure glad you spoke up about the Fee. Only capitalized because
it begins a sentence.
Love always,
Pea
N: Thanks to all of you for your moving responses. Gonna post a light'n next. 'Speck we can all use it. HUGS!!
Fee
Not sure if the use of my nick name Fee in there was intentional and if so I didn't understand...
excellent work...hard feelings and fine poetry Phyllis...
John
Be always safe,
Karen
the comfort zone of all who live in denial
Excellent work, Pea!...ET
Stay safe
Ron
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :( >tears! <
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.