Just a Shower now and Then (poem) by Phyllis Jean Green on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on September 2, 2008

I love the line "to dream away sorrow, anger guilt." You said a lot just in those few words, let alone with all the others. You can pack more meaning in one word than most of us can put in a whole stanza. Awesome work you produce. Liz

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg

Reviewed on August 31, 2008

Tantalizing, with palatable head rhyme. Also the first words of each stanza could be the springboard for another thought-process.
Morning cover after showering
Thankyou Pea
Richard

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce

Reviewed on August 30, 2008

A heartfelt write, Pea!

Hugs,

Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling

Reviewed on August 30, 2008

A wonderful write my friend. You give the reader much to think about with words of wisdom as I too agree that our tears do actually console us, help to heal, release, and revive us...well done indeed!
Blessings,
Joyce B.

Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse

Reviewed on August 30, 2008

Beautiful Morning To You Phyllis :)
Lovely Poem & Oddly Enough Our Tears Do Console Through The Wonderful Release Into Renewals Gifts
Much Love & Inspirations To You
Embraced ~ Embrass�
Vickie

Reviewed by Aberjhani

Reviewed on August 27, 2008

The melancholy of these lines tugs at the heart with quiet sadness but the warm humanity that overflows with every line fills the soul with an appreciation for beauty. Thank you Gracious Poet Phyllis Jean Green,

Aberjhani

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on August 27, 2008

Thank you Phyllis
for this enjoyable write
Love & peace be with you

William

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo

Reviewed on August 26, 2008

In setting the spirit free there is a release that washes over us and revitalizes us, as a new beginning. This has the flow of perfection and a pleasure to read....

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Axilea MU

Reviewed on August 26, 2008

Nice use of alliterations and good imagery.
Lovely ending.

Axilea

Reviewed by Glenda Bixler

Reviewed on August 26, 2008

Sometimes the tears will not come...

May they come for you!

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on August 26, 2008

such a soothing write to anyone with troubled souls-i loved it-- "To
dream away sorrow,anger, and guilt." What a wonderful thought

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on August 26, 2008

Have to agree with Karla, this is perfect just the way it is and I wouldn't change a single thing. Keep em coming
hugs
fee

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on August 26, 2008

(((Pea)))

PERFECTION. What more can I say? Stunning imagery ("Long warm rain." "Sunlotioned hands." "Sleep as long as we want.") makes for a very comforting write - indeed. Feel like I've had a massage!! Your words are SOOOO relaxing. =]

My new favorite of yours (and Honey, you have a lot of favorites!).

(((((HUGS))))) and love from Texas way, Karla.

Reviewed by Gene Williamson

Reviewed on August 26, 2008

I think the line breaks are perfect, Phyllis.
The poem beautifully done.
-gene.

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on August 26, 2008

Great write, Pea; well done! BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Bonnie May

Reviewed on August 26, 2008

Beautifully written and soooooooooooooo cleanly done. Great write. Love, Bonnie

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on August 26, 2008

I say the same thing, almost, no showers more than once a week...I don't smell no-how...or were you speaking on another subject...;-) ed