When the way is dark and lonely
When you've walked your last mile
When the shadows gather around you
And you've forgotten how to smile
When the world turns against you
And your heart is solid stone
You look up with tearfilled eyes
But everyone is gone
When your path is long and weary
And you think no one will understand..
...Take His hand
When you're at your weakest moment
And there's no sun in your sky
And your wishing in your heart
That the Lord would let you die
When your pain gets unbearable
That you ache deep in your soul
And no matter which way you search
The world seems hard and cold
When you scream out in despair
Sinking deeper in shifting sand
...Take His hand
When you can't go another step
And you can't cope alone
When you look back on your life
At sins you can't condone
When all your friends have left you
And you have no family
And peace in a bottle of pills
Is the only thing you see
When you are weary, to sick to stand
...Take His hand
Linda, There is no other heart that speaks as yours. Every poetic word you've written will be found in the book of time, keeping rythem within your heartbeat.
I loved this..it truly speaks to the soul.
Only As You Can Write True Love Is Compassion--Where To Turn**Take His Hand--It's There,i.e. If You Fall Get Back Up One More Time--You As I Will Make It To The End...
Truth Which Promises: **JUST REWARD TO HIM HER WHO ENDURTH TO THE END...
Like Jerry, this too, is a continuation of my last poem. When everything seems to be hopeless, just a simple "help me, Lord," has always worked... great write...
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on March 31, 2005
Damn, Linda, this is a continuation of my latest poem. Absolutely. Gotta love it.
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I just got done, "taking his hand",
one might say!
Love to you,
Becca P (Henry) Lang
Elena
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :D
I loved this..it truly speaks to the soul.
Lisa
Thanks for sharing Linda!!
Love Tinka
Truth Which Promises: **JUST REWARD TO HIM HER WHO ENDURTH TO THE END...
Excellent....
Your True Friend,TRASK