Now heart this time I want you to listen
and listen REAL good-
You know you never do the things
I feel you should!
You believe every word a man whispers
in my ear -
We have to be careful now - I've
shed too many tears.
Now stop thinking of him - tho his
words are tempting you-
This may be a game to him -
and you believe it's true !
Now heart...don't do that! You are
melting in his arms-
I told you not to fall for his
unbridled charms!
You just never listen , heart -
Mmm his kisses are so sweet-
Now stand firm ..don't give in-
Mmm he's sweepin me off my feet!
Heart , don't listen to him - he
could tell you anything-
He's talkin about marriage and diamond
wedding rings!
I can feel you melting - we have talked
all about this!
Mmmm...his hands is velvet and there's
magic in his kiss!
Ok heart.... do as you please , you're
going to do it anyway-
Maybe this time he won't hurt me -
Maybe this time he will stay.........
god, Linda.. this is me too! what a coooool way to express a familiar battle. One touch one kiss and I become one BIG heart! all smiles and no brain.. ahhhhhhhh.. to be loved, or at least completely charmed. (sigh). lovely, clever write. katy. (smile).
Reviewed by Katharine Clifford
Reviewed on August 26, 2002
This is the rate I had meant to give you. So very sorry! I know you understand I am just really upset with myself that this has happened.
The conversational tone of this poem just drew me in, Linda. I like how you and your heart are so honest with each other, yet neither is willing to give an inch. Perhaps other people with head and heart conflicts can use your poem as a guide to ease their own turmoil. I like this one a lot. :)
Reviewed by Mark Mahoney (Reader)
Reviewed on August 25, 2002
Linda, a really lovely read this that says what we all felt/feel sometime or another...follow your head as well as your heart, and if the two are on the same wavelenght...well...great write a pleasure to read...take care...Mark xx
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on August 25, 2002
Outstanding!! Wonderful image of the conversation and flows beautifully with real emotion.
Wonderful write my dear friend ... wonderful write ... Keep it up ... You always come up with something different. You are so good at heart ... You are so good at ur thoughts and You are excellent in ur writings ...
Keep it up my dear friend ... Keep it up ... Wish u all happiness and all smiles :D :D ... ha ha ha :D ....
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Keep it up my dear friend ... Keep it up ... Wish u all happiness and all smiles :D :D ... ha ha ha :D ....