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Daddy , You Are With Me!
by Linda M Hill → (All Poetry by Linda M Hill)
  
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Daddy, I wish you had'nt had to go-
But there's something I want you to know.
You gave me the best two weeks I've ever had-
So Daddy , please smile..don't be sad.
We had such fun - we laughed and played-
Even thou you left Daddy, your spirit stayed.

You are in the gentle wind that blows thru my hair-
When I see the sun shining , Daddy I feel you there.
You will never leave me Daddy, please understand-
You're the gentle spirit that always holds my hand.
We may be 400 miles apart, but you are still here-
I can still feel you , Daddy, you will always be near.

When I feel the rain fall softly from the sky-
You are holding me Daddy- keeping me dry!
If I get sad or a dark cloud moves my way-
You are close beside me to chase them away.
I am only three...theres so much i want to do-
I'm trying to let you know Daddy, that I LOVE YOU!

Never give up the dream Daddy, one day you'll see-
You will look up and there I will be!

To a friend....

© Linda Hill 2002



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 Reviews of "Daddy , You Are With Me!"
Reviewed by Victor Jensen
Reviewed on September 4, 2002
Touching and well writen.

Reviewed by richard poor
Reviewed on August 29, 2002
tanks,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

Reviewed by Joel Raja Kumar J (Reader)
Reviewed on August 28, 2002
You sure miss your Dad don't you? A painfully emotional writing. Shows the world how you feel so clearly.

Joel

Reviewed by Gumby Pokey (Reader)
Reviewed on August 28, 2002
Wow this hit home My kids are 800 miles away
this brought tears to my eyes.
you really know how to bring out emotions

Reviewed by Drkman (Reader)
Reviewed on August 28, 2002
Linda. Great write that probes the feelings of so many young people when homes are torn apart. I remember this emotion so well.
Drkman

Reviewed on August 28, 2002
Linda, the message is so sad. Divorce or what ever keeps a parent from their child is heartbreaking. Well done 1st person account. Tim

Reviewed by Sanil nath (Reader)
Reviewed on August 27, 2002
Wonderful tribute ... keep it up ... Good write ... Wish your firend all happiness from the Parents ...

Excellent Linda ...
Keep Smiling and Take Care ..

Reviewed by Jenni Kalicharan
Reviewed on August 27, 2002
Graet write, Linda... so touching..
Jenni

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
Reviewed on August 27, 2002
8-27-02

___ For The Love(Compassion) Of (God) Is,
____For The Love Of Little Children...

TRASK


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