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You Can't Touch My Pain
by Linda M Hill → (All Poetry by Linda M Hill)
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All we see are stars and stripes
But it represents so much more....
If our American flag could speak
Is this what it would say....
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A dark and humid morning
A soldier kneels and prays
He dreams of family and home
As he counts the days
He don't hear the gunfire
As the bullet finds its place
He's left hurt and bleeding
Disbelief etched on his face
With pride I stand and wave
Amist war and crimson stains
You can raise me to the skies
But you can't touch my pain

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I'm the red white and blue
But there is so much more to see
Blood, tears and a soldiers screams
Are sown inside of me
With every stitch of the needle
Another prayer is said
As the war rages on and on
Another soldier is dead
I wave with pride and glory
As the world goes insane
You can raise me to the skies
But you can't touch my pain

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A soldier's mother weeps in anquish
Clutching a picture of her son
Nothing can ever bring him back
When all is said and done
I hear the cries of the forgotten
Tears America can't see
A soldier holding his dying friend
No bitter taste of victory
A child weeps over her fathers grave
Standing in the pouring rain
You can raise me to the skies
But you can't touch my pain...

(C) Linda Hill

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Reviewed by Rhonda Galizia
Reviewed on June 7, 2013
A work of Excellence! Currently, we have two nephews serving.. one is a Navy Seal, and the other an Air Force Fire Inspector. Both would be honored to read these words. Both have served in war; both have re-upped twice; both have seen more suffering and death by the age of 30 than most at thrice their age.
The LORD has given you a very special Gift, Linda, which you use expertly for the sake of others. GOD Bless You!

Love in Christ, Rhonda

Reviewed by Laurel Lamperd
Reviewed on February 16, 2013
A very sad poem, Linda. Thank goodness the war in Afghan looks to be ending.

Reviewed by Bernice Angoh
Reviewed on February 13, 2013
This is so incredibly beautiful, very well written Linda!

Reviewed by Michael Jones
Reviewed on February 11, 2013
Linda, this poem makes me cry, I remember my fellow soilders in Vietnam so many of them did not make it home! I am blest to be here to read your poem. It is awesome, you do yourself an injustice by not writing a book, God has your back and we all will support you here on Authorsden. Peace!!!

Reviewed by Kate Clifford
Reviewed on February 9, 2013
I knew the twins would love this as they read it. I do too. I will forever salute those that fight for our freedom but I will always forever look for a way to create peace for all of us and remove the need for war.

Reviewed on February 8, 2013
Awesome poetry, Linda; very well done!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Texas, Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on February 8, 2013
The horror of war in a nutshell. It's worse for mothers, lovers, and children. They said my uncle George was crazy because he was, “shellshocked,” in World War I. The fact is that he was a medic and served in a military hospital in Georgia during the war, tending to the wounded and dying coming back from the trenches in Europe.

Why can't leaders see that war is insane.

Ron

Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
Reviewed on February 8, 2013
Poetry at its very best!!!! Beautifully penned, Linda!

Anna

Reviewed by John Domino
Reviewed on February 7, 2013
Wow! A well written poem that demands pause and reflection. Mom's pain for her loss is truly unthinkable and unimaginable. You have captured this thought very well.

I pray for peace in this land.
May you have peace, love and blessings that only the Lord can provide.

John Michael

Reviewed by Budd Nelson
Reviewed on February 7, 2013
all we can do is honor her
budd


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