Buried Alive
Dirt crusted over me
I can feel its taste
Darkness decending
Someone help me
Someone find me
Before he comes back
Buried Alive
Fear as I've never known
As a coldness comes over me
Shadows in the night
Is it him
Has he come back for me
No, just the trees
Buried Alive
Death coming to swallow me
Screams won't come
Hard to breathe
Trembling in fear
Is that footsteps
No, just the leaves
Buried Alive
In the pit of swirling darkness
I ride the waves of pain
Dirt crushing me
Fear strangling me
Terror beyond belief
In the dusty mist of hell
Claustrophobics are coming out of the closet.
Sorry, a little humor so I can get to sleep tonight after this poem.
You truly captured horror.
Awesome job.
John
Ahhhh. Horribly good horror. No more chili before bedtime. [smiles]
Reviewed by na na (Reader)
Reviewed on March 29, 2003
Linda, you gave a beautiful description of what someone feels like during this experience. And the picture you used spoke a thousand words. It made your poem so much better. You are coming up with a dark
side I never knew you had. But it is a brilliant poem.
*aaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!* being claustrophobic, this one reaalllly got me...geez. creepy, dark, TERRIFYING write...well done *shivers* WILL YOU LET ME OUT NOW???? :0 ((((HUGS)))) and love, karla. i promise i'll be good...
Reviewed by Sanil nath (Reader)
Reviewed on March 29, 2003
Excellent Write...
Buried Alive!!!
bye
Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
Reviewed on March 29, 2003
Linda you have got me trembling here...good write..Floria
This was an awesome write of the fear of enclosement. You captured so well. Thank You for your kindness.
yf
tony
Excellent_
Literally Millions Upon Millions Of Humans Are Buried Alive In Sin,There Own Arrogance, Self Inequities,i.e. Greed__Ignorance...
TRASK
Sorry, a little humor so I can get to sleep tonight after this poem.
You truly captured horror.
Awesome job.
John
very poe-esque
john+
side I never knew you had. But it is a brilliant poem.
Buried Alive!!!
bye
Jack
Beautifully done,
Reindeer
One of the most terrifying fears...
Excellent write!
Hugs,
Allen