Teenage Cry (poem) by Linda M Hill on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper

Reviewed on November 9, 2003

good one Linda, alot of the young people don't think about the after effects of their actions. Then comes the child with the problems also. a problem to the rest of the world. hug G

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on November 7, 2003

In my line of work, I see this truth so often. It is a sad reality but your words may teach and some may learn. Thank you. Your friend from BC, Regis.

Reviewed by Rebekah Rosie Lang

Reviewed on November 7, 2003

Unfortunately, too many teens are left this way Linda.
You wrote about this with such eloquence. You have a
knack for writing about things such as this for
example. Bless you for getting the word out!
Thanks for my review I believe you left.

Reviewed by Simon Thurlow (Reader)

Reviewed on November 7, 2003

Sadly, too many women end up this way. Ensnared by the silky words of a predator.
Sorrowful write

Reviewed by L M (Reader)

Reviewed on November 7, 2003

Very hard lesson Excellent write Linda.

LM

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on November 7, 2003

So sad, for all concerned but most of all for the babies left with no father, or disposed of before birth.

Reviewed by Tami Ryan

Reviewed on November 6, 2003

A realistic, heartbreaking write, Linda. Thanks for sharing.

Tami

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on November 5, 2003

A real gut-wrenching write Linda!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on November 5, 2003

Many young men only think of themselves
It should be a law that these young men
should at least pay money on the support
of the child.
Go read my last one on homeless children
when you can. Your friend.........Ron

Reviewed by John Bidwell

Reviewed on November 5, 2003

Another heart breaker, and words so needed to be heard.
You have such a beautiful caring heart.
Love,
John

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on November 5, 2003

a hard lesson of life! powerfully expressed!

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on November 5, 2003

A sad reality for some. Great write!

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya

Reviewed on November 5, 2003

Linda....Heart tearing write....powerful write....realistic write....I think this should be read by all....love n luck....BHUWAN

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK

Reviewed on November 5, 2003

How Life (God) Teaches You a Lesson Still To Be Learned From It Again,Again,And Again!

Excellent!

TRASK

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on November 5, 2003

Another gut-wrenching write, Linda. But bravo for penning it.

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on November 5, 2003

A too sad occurance. The stigma isn't so bad these enlightened days, whether that is a plus or a minus the school is still out on that. An age-old lament.

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on November 5, 2003

heartwrenching cry of many of today's youth! powerful, gutsy write! (((HUGS))) :(

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on November 5, 2003

(((linda)))

powerful cry from the mouths of too many young teens these days

timely and insightful--well done

(((HUGS))) and love,

karla. :(