I Don't Want To Take This Anymore (poem) by Linda M Hill on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on February 4, 2004

piece the puzzle!

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on February 4, 2004

(((linda)))

i feel your pain--(((HUGS)))

powerful, melancholy write *tears*--one of your best

(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :(

Reviewed by The Voice (Reader)

Reviewed on February 3, 2004

Your broken pieces from the floor
I will pick up by the score
My friend, You know I have been there before
And I will continue to be forever more

Great Piece.

Hugs Always,

The Voice

Reviewed by J. Allen Wilson

Reviewed on February 3, 2004

Excellent Linda, well expressed in emotional latitude, but things are never ever as bad as they seem...I loved the way you pulled this one together.
Allen

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK

Reviewed on February 3, 2004

And, The Walls Do Will Keep Closing In On You All Everybody!!

Excellent!

TRASK

Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader)

Reviewed on February 3, 2004

AWESOME write, Linda!

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on February 3, 2004

Powerful write, Linda; hope you are okay! Email me if you ever need to talk, I'll listen and will lift you up in prayer to Jesus!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :( >tears <

Reviewed by Simon Thurlow (Reader)

Reviewed on February 3, 2004

Touching write

Reviewed by Roger Richard (Reader)

Reviewed on February 3, 2004

Linda I enjoy your work but this kind makes me wish I could be there for you like your poems are there for others. Hugs and best wishes. Roger

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya

Reviewed on February 3, 2004

Linda...yet another gem from you....love n luck....BHUWAN

Reviewed by Dale Clark

Reviewed on February 3, 2004

'My life in pieces on the floor
And I don't want to take this anymore'

These lines say it all. So Powerful!

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on February 2, 2004

I can relate to this one Linda!!

Take care!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by John Bidwell

Reviewed on February 2, 2004

Wow you capture the depths of pain so many feel.
They say it's aways darkest just before the dawn. I hope so.
Hang in their special lady.
You are needed more than you know.
HUGS,
John

Reviewed by Lori Moore

Reviewed on February 2, 2004

Wonderful expression!

Reviewed by Vicky Jeter

Reviewed on February 2, 2004

Hi Linda
I'm wondering if there might be some area of your life that is working and just does not weigh in as much as the pain. One way to find light is to focus on what is not so noticable. Balanced things don't make a splash. Find some very simple thing that you never have to think about working the way it is supposed to, and then ask yourself what it is about it that makes it easy.
Holding a space of wellness, Vicky

Reviewed by Michael Morash (Reader)

Reviewed on February 2, 2004

Then don't. It's your choise to make, no one elses. Do what's good for you and the rest will pall into place.

Michael

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on February 2, 2004

Hey, if this is fiction, it's great. If it isn't, you have already solved your problem by putting it to pen and allowing the rest of us a chance to tell you that you are not alone. We are behind you and care for you. You are good and things ALWAYS works out.

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on February 2, 2004

Hope this is fiction Linda..excellent write..
Your friend......Ron

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on February 2, 2004

Hang in there Linda, It's always the darkest before the light breaks through. I pray that it will happen soon for you. Don't despair that never solves anything. You are a great and sensitive person who needs God's helping hand. I will pray that you get it.
Love and hugs

George

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on February 2, 2004

Very powerful poem, Linda.

But keep looking for that light - it's there somewhere; it always is.